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for Engulfed in Darkness

by Ravenx

person Camille
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a good cute story! Finally Bakura and Ryo got together and got mated! Now comes the baby! I could picture the kid being just like Bakura and Ryo hitting them both over the head with a frying pan to keep them in line! HAHAHAHAHAH!! I can't wait for the sequel. You have two hours to write it! ;)
person jadedkatrina
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story and I can't wait to see the sequel...
so please continue to email me with updates
and good luck with writing

Happy Holidays, Merry Christmas, & have a
safe and Happy New Year

Jadedkatrina

Ja Ne
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Simply wonderful! This was so great. Bakura and
Ryou are finally together and will be making babies before
you know it. I stayed up all night (it's 9 am now...) looking
for an update and i am so happy that i did. (i loved bakura's
bathroom, btw. Red & black :drool:) Thank you for sharing this
with us!*glomps you* I cant wait to read the sequel! Joey and
Ryou with babies!! Merry Christmas to ya and have a safe and
happy New year!!
person Sarah Costa
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great End! Send email to let me now when you update...Ja ne...Merry Christmas!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I found this story again, and I must say I am impressed. It is well done, and well written. I'm looking forward to the sequel! If it's not too much trouble, can you e-mail me when you post? Thanks, and Merry Christmas!
person Devilgirl255
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter.I can't wait for your new story Engulfed in Brightness.
Im looking forward to it.
person Horizont
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
End? What d'you mean by "end"? I mean, you've been talking about a sequel the whole time! Plus, Ryou needs to take that serum thingy and so on AND Hikaru looked like he wanted nothing more than a child of his own and... and well, I'd like to read more of that. :P

Ciao, and Merry Christmas! ^_^x
person Ken-z
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ken-z loved that she did
O.O I will love you forever if you
make a continuation of bakura and ryou's kids and
him satrting his family.By Ra I will bow down to you and carry out
your every command ^.^;
(I know Im gettin carried away but I love your story)
person Lady Shinigami
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! They're MATES now!! *does happy dance* May they live forever and ever and ever in peace and happiness!! Oh, I can hardly wait to read the sequel!!

Engulfed in Brightness . . .


~LS
person Sera
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT~! What a fantastic ending! Now, I DEMAND that you post the sequel NOW! IT'S AN ORDER!!!!!

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