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January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Uwaaa!! <3 I couldn't stop reading! You're amazing at writing! The only thing that confused me was that I thought Malik was the vampire instead of Marik(I thought it would of fit better that way and the names are just to similar o3o) but I still loved it :D I swear to god that if you don't have any other stories, I will find you, lock you in a basement, and make you write some more! You get 10 stars ^_^
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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this.
At first I thougth what great a Hunter Bakura would be and no not all four could be Majestics that would be too cliché but of course it was so. Thou cliché it was great.
I love the Ryou and Bakura you showed here. I mean it I thought I would melt when they were playing pool it was just so cute.
I'll see after I read the sequal.
At first I thougth what great a Hunter Bakura would be and no not all four could be Majestics that would be too cliché but of course it was so. Thou cliché it was great.
I love the Ryou and Bakura you showed here. I mean it I thought I would melt when they were playing pool it was just so cute.
I'll see after I read the sequal.
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, here I was just reading your side series to this trilogy upon running a search engine, and saying how Baku needed someone.. LOL you already have Ryou. COOL!!!
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such a beautiful story and so wonderfully written. Oh, how I love you for writing this!
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed your story. It was different, original, and creative.
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I love this story! Your Alternate Universe was so well described and backed up with facts that it was very realistic! I like your reasoning behind everything and also how your story was set up. You are a really amazing writer. It was great how you eased Ryou into his relationship with Bakura, instead of having it as love at first. It was more believable because of Bakura's temperment. Your describing of the characters really let the readers see into emotions and feelings. It was great how you moved around some to the diffrent characters and developed them as well as the main characters. It made your story grow as a whole. Anyway, amzing story and I can't wait to read the sequels! I look forward to reading more of your unique and creative writing! I hope in the sequels you have more scenes betwee the other characters. I really liked the scenes you had between them is this story, because, even though Bakura and Ryou are the main characters, you split the lemons evenly between all the characters! Yay! I love your writing, and am off to read the sequels! Great Story!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was sweet! ^_^ About time Baku and Ryou got together. lol. And the story was awesome, very captivating chapters, especially the suspense in ch 9, really well written overall. The components and the style of writing was additionally mesmerizing. I don't think I have enough words to say how incredibly well written this story is.
Sad that the story's over, but happy that there's two sequels! Yay! Well, I'm off to go read them and I'll review when I'm finished. ^_^
Sad that the story's over, but happy that there's two sequels! Yay! Well, I'm off to go read them and I'll review when I'm finished. ^_^
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story!!!! i loved it!!!
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that it was very good. I liked how you made Bakura mean to a point but still some what of a softy when it came to Ryou. Keep up the good work.
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY!!! I love it! YAOI FOREVER!!! You rock as a writer!!! Ja.