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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! I think by far that is one of your best chapters in this story. ^_^ I only saw a few errors in wording/spelling. If you ever need a Beta reader.......please drop me an email. Its not easy to get caught up in a fanfic with the way most of them are. By the way........Atemu's dark side really reminded me of Yami Bakura! :)~
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT chapter...please update quick i totaly love this fic : )
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
luv ur story, update quick i cant wait...
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! I feel so bad for all of them!! Please update soon.
It did not suck....it was too short but it went as I thought it might if she lived. ^__^ Don't take to heart any negative feedback. YOU are the author and if you are happy with it then thats all that matters. I happen to love the story so far. All the characters are a bit OCC but that is the nature of fanfics.
It did not suck....it was too short but it went as I thought it might if she lived. ^__^ Don't take to heart any negative feedback. YOU are the author and if you are happy with it then thats all that matters. I happen to love the story so far. All the characters are a bit OCC but that is the nature of fanfics.
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to read the next chapter, nice job please please pretty please ok now I am sounding like a kid, update soon this is a sweet story.
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wow very sad and sicking, you did your job, WOW is all I can say, that was really well written please update with the next chapter soon
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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really curious to see how this story turns out. I like the war Atemu seem's to have with himself and his dark side....*grins* I look forward to seeing more soon.
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOO POOR ATEMU!! Please update soon! I love the story so far...
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its very good!! i really fantanticly do love it! But, why did The Pharaoh act so strangly? please keep writing!