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April 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to help get you... unstuck... but I suck horribly at writing. All I can really say is that I loved it to bits and hope you get the next chapter out soon. Good luck!! (Sorry, can't really be more helpful than that. -_-,)
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April 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* that was so sweet! *sigh* Seto and Jou *drools* ne wayz, i enjoyed the fic very VERY much. there should be more jou and seto stories out there! o well, keep up the good job! ^_^
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April 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aaawww...soooo sweet! Um...wedding...hmmm...I think it would be kinda funny actually...Seto getting all nervous and stuff. Just don't sticu inu in a dress. Please?
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April 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi I like where this story is heading but I'm not sure if you know this but Jounochi(I know I can't spell it) is Jou's last name. Katsuya is his first name but for that sake of this story just call him Jou. As if you would do it any other way. Contact me when you update!
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April 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nuva: whats with the name? *points to Kitty Kat review name*
daisy: eh, i got tired of just using 'daisy', so i'm using that! ^_^ *sniffles* that was so prettyful! i would love if you could describe the wedding, but then again...
nuva: *grins* we would really love to read about the honeymoon! *wink wink*
daisy: do what you feel would be best! keep this up pwease, i love it already! ^_~
daisy: eh, i got tired of just using 'daisy', so i'm using that! ^_^ *sniffles* that was so prettyful! i would love if you could describe the wedding, but then again...
nuva: *grins* we would really love to read about the honeymoon! *wink wink*
daisy: do what you feel would be best! keep this up pwease, i love it already! ^_~
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April 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I was reading your fic. I found it really cute! Please continue
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April 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* I love it! That was so sweet! The only complaint I have is a name error. Jounouchi is actually his last name, and Katsuya is his first. In Japan, they put last names first for some reason.. I suppose it has to do with courtesy or whatnot. *shrugs* So really, when he marries Seto, it would be Katsuya Kaiba, not Jounouchi Kaiba. *grins* That's all though, the rest is great! Please continue, I'd like to see where this is all going.
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April 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: Go right to the honeymoon! lemon, lemon, lemon!
Karen: I have to agree with her. You can flashback to bits and pieces of the cermony if it is really important. However, with all of the wedding fics I've read (not that many mind you) the descriptions of the cermony either sucked or it went on in way to much detail.
LD: hence the "lemon, lemon, lemon" I mean really, can't you say anything simply?
Karen: Not generally.
LD: humph. Please update soon. If you don't, she'll get whiney. It is not a pretty sight.
Karen: I have to agree with her. You can flashback to bits and pieces of the cermony if it is really important. However, with all of the wedding fics I've read (not that many mind you) the descriptions of the cermony either sucked or it went on in way to much detail.
LD: hence the "lemon, lemon, lemon" I mean really, can't you say anything simply?
Karen: Not generally.
LD: humph. Please update soon. If you don't, she'll get whiney. It is not a pretty sight.