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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a sweet story, I just like it so much I hope you up date it soon
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
i really love this fic
i really love this fic
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've read your story before!!! Several times
First when it was just the three chapters and I wanted so much more for it to continue!!
I was so excited when you updated with three more chapters! I was at uni when I found out and was reading it in the BEL labs where you're aren't technically suppossed to surf the internet just do work and my sister was with me going we have to go stop reading and I was no way!!
I love the lemon - it was really thought out for the surgery and stuff. Most people don't go into how one of them gets pregnant which was really cool in this story! And the angst in chapter six - I wanted to hit Seto - I'm so glad that he made up with Jou. It's cool the way you've developed the characters from how they were in highschool. Explained how they've changed and grown with each other. Makes them all seem very in character!!
I'm surprised no one has reviewed! This is my first review on Adult cause I didn't know if you had to be a member or not!! But I think Adult has had problems with people reviewing. I mean you see so many people have read the stories but very few reviewed - I think that's why Maggiemay left.
But I love your story so much!!!! You have to continue!!!! ASAP I wanna know what the baby will be.
I have an idea for another story with Seto/Jou that I want to write where Seto adopts a daughter and Jou becomes the guardian of his four year old cousin (second cousin on his mothers side I'll explain - somehow) and their daughters become friends forcing them to spend time together and we see how Seto grows - cause as smart and good at business he is and raising Mokuba that Kaiba needs to grow up - so what do you think? Cause I'm thinking of posting it on Adult cause I want to include lemons but I'm no good at writing them - I can't even write a decent kiss - but your lemons are really believable and not just the smut so many other use. So I would be really really really really really never out of your debt if you agreed to write lemons for me if and when I write the story.
But that over with BLUE STAR is really really cool. It was your story along with some others that finally pushed me into writing my own.
Keep up the good work and UPDATE!!!! PLEASE - I'm begging on my knees and everything!
First when it was just the three chapters and I wanted so much more for it to continue!!
I was so excited when you updated with three more chapters! I was at uni when I found out and was reading it in the BEL labs where you're aren't technically suppossed to surf the internet just do work and my sister was with me going we have to go stop reading and I was no way!!
I love the lemon - it was really thought out for the surgery and stuff. Most people don't go into how one of them gets pregnant which was really cool in this story! And the angst in chapter six - I wanted to hit Seto - I'm so glad that he made up with Jou. It's cool the way you've developed the characters from how they were in highschool. Explained how they've changed and grown with each other. Makes them all seem very in character!!
I'm surprised no one has reviewed! This is my first review on Adult cause I didn't know if you had to be a member or not!! But I think Adult has had problems with people reviewing. I mean you see so many people have read the stories but very few reviewed - I think that's why Maggiemay left.
But I love your story so much!!!! You have to continue!!!! ASAP I wanna know what the baby will be.
I have an idea for another story with Seto/Jou that I want to write where Seto adopts a daughter and Jou becomes the guardian of his four year old cousin (second cousin on his mothers side I'll explain - somehow) and their daughters become friends forcing them to spend time together and we see how Seto grows - cause as smart and good at business he is and raising Mokuba that Kaiba needs to grow up - so what do you think? Cause I'm thinking of posting it on Adult cause I want to include lemons but I'm no good at writing them - I can't even write a decent kiss - but your lemons are really believable and not just the smut so many other use. So I would be really really really really really never out of your debt if you agreed to write lemons for me if and when I write the story.
But that over with BLUE STAR is really really cool. It was your story along with some others that finally pushed me into writing my own.
Keep up the good work and UPDATE!!!! PLEASE - I'm begging on my knees and everything!
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
soo damn cute....please continue FAST~~
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey im hooked on this story! pleapdatpdate it soon!! is jou the one thats gonna be preggy? im not to sure ... although i think its him ... that would be great cuz seto is like the one who wears the pants in the relationship ... lol
thanks!
thanks!
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December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aghhhh
i love seto and jou...
please please please post the next chappy!!!
i love seto and jou...
please please please post the next chappy!!!
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! ^_^x
I'm writing this review after reading the first chapter (I think I'll read the next ones later!).
I don't know why, but the whole time untill Seto got the ring out I was just as nervous as he was. I was nearly jumping in my chair... it was funny! ^.^x
Just one thing, and that made me write this:
It's about the japanese names. You know, in Japan, they say the family's name first... (that's a bit hard to discribe...)
For the american version of YGO they called Jounouchi Joey, which means they created a new first name from his family's name. His first name is Katsuya (it means "winner" by the way"). If Joey would marry Seto and take over his name is name would be Kaiba Katsuya (though I don't think this sounds very good... ^^;;).
neway, I hope that was understandable... *sweatdrop*
Ciao-ciao,
Horizont
I'm writing this review after reading the first chapter (I think I'll read the next ones later!).
I don't know why, but the whole time untill Seto got the ring out I was just as nervous as he was. I was nearly jumping in my chair... it was funny! ^.^x
Just one thing, and that made me write this:
It's about the japanese names. You know, in Japan, they say the family's name first... (that's a bit hard to discribe...)
For the american version of YGO they called Jounouchi Joey, which means they created a new first name from his family's name. His first name is Katsuya (it means "winner" by the way"). If Joey would marry Seto and take over his name is name would be Kaiba Katsuya (though I don't think this sounds very good... ^^;;).
neway, I hope that was understandable... *sweatdrop*
Ciao-ciao,
Horizont
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWW that was so CUTE!!! But I wonder what can this meeting be??? PLZ UPDATE SOON if you don't I'm going to bite of my fingers off from all the nail bitting I'm going to be doing! ~Anyways~ This story is really GOOD Keep up the GOOD work LATER...
P.S
Would you mind E-mailing when you Update THANX^_^
P.S
Would you mind E-mailing when you Update THANX^_^
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH, Man why won't they let them finish that is just wrong to disturb such a PRETTY couple~anywho~ I Wonder what this meeting could be?!? Hope you Bring out the next Chappie SOON Cuz I can be impatient some times ^__^ BYE!!!
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^____^ I still like this fic very very much. ^.^ Soo good. You took a long time for this chappy though...=( I hope the next one doesn't take as long. Please! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Wanna read more! ^.~ You left me wondering and curious! Moooorreee...Arigato! Ja ne!