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for Love Me, Hurt Me

by Klepto

schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought I had reviewed this one before. Great story. Seto is very cuel. He killed Yugi's family, made him kill his best friend and made it impossible to see the sun forever. I hope he, at least, treats him well now.
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm on this huge Seto/Yugi kick. Wish you'd go back and write them like you used to. Gad I miss your earlier work. Think you could still pull off a half descent one shot? They're almost impossible to find.
person RayeMoon
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear, this was a wonderful story! Vampires are a favorite thing of mine and a Seto-Vampire is very hot. I liked a samurai-Yugi as well. Whenever Yugi is strong is such a thing for me! And best of all, one of the absolute best lines I have ever seen, is your ending line "Because you love the sun". It's hot, cruel, twisted, and sick. Love it! That was a terrific story-ette. Jaa!
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quite interesting...LOVED IT!!!!!
person carol
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wish you could continue. it's no good as a one-shot fic. it must be continued to the best. please.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oohhh...creepy........ ^___~ I liked it a lot!!! Very kewl!!!
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know I have read this before and I most likely reviewed, but I don't care. I still love this story. It's so powerful in emotions and pain. A reader can just read over the lines and it most likely will strike a chord with them. Anyways I think I figured it out. The line abou Seto saying he turned Yugi, cause he always loved the sun. Seto, was jealous. He a vampired can never see and enjoy the sun, and will never age again. Yugi a human who can, will eventually age and die. Seto being fearful of losing him to anyone or anything else, turns him. His own Yugi will never be taken from him. Well at least that is what I gathered. I still think you can make this a longer story. Keep up the great work. coolsa.
person Terra
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...that is really dark but yeah I thought they would make and cute couple.