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I am ever so really very shyly sorry if....if this is a repeat of my review. I....I shyly tried to review last night but my computer went um...wonky...and so I'm not shyly sure if it went through. If it did....pretty shyly please I'm so sorry for taking up more of your time with repeating myself. If it didn't...here it shyly is.....just in case.

Ever so very shyly sorry to bother you..but..I....I just had to shyly say.....I just read Giving In and the 10 chapters of this fic straight through. You.....you are the best writer I..I have ever had the shy pleasure of reading. I....*blushes a thousand shades of red* I....get so lost in your stories that I shyly feel like I'm right there with them. I shyly haven't read fics like that. I'm shyly so very sorry for such a long review. I shyly hope that...that well...life is good to you. Pretty shyly please I'm shyly sorry and write more when you get the chance. Good stories...should never be rushed. *shyly runs to hide before I really shyly bore/upset/anger/drive the authoress insane*

AAAAHHH. I can't believe you did that. You left me in suspence again. That was a fantastic chapter. I loved the fight with Kage but what of Yami. Whats Kage going to do to him. You have to update soon. Man i really can't take this. What a ride. Please up the great work. I love every minute of this fic.

HOLY COW!!! This just keeps getting better and better. I'm glad you didn't make us wait too long for the update. I'm glad Kage didn't get Yugi, but I hope that Yami can hold on until the others can find him. I'm really hooked on this tale and hope to see another wonderful update soon!!!!

Here's another log for the fire....

Good chapter. The tension in the knife fight was good.

Will the dream link between Yugi and Yami be used more while "lessons" are being done...

Awww Yami is just sooo selfless. He is already broken and there is no chance for his spirit to heal if this f** Kage keeps interfering!

SOOOOO frustraiting. Now when you think things were looking up ... with him and Yugi!!! Ahhh update soon, pleae

I love da story so far i wish i could write as well as u could. anyway plaease comtinue with da story and yes u r evil for ending it there but i can get ova it as long as u update sometime. ^.^ ciao.

AAAHHH!!! You and your cliffies. I had a friend on another mailing list once that routinely got kicked off her own cliffs... if we start doing that to you will you stop doing this to us?!? Hee hee, kidding, luv ya. Great chapter, really good scene.. I'd say it was truely inspirational, but I've decided I just can't write lemons. So, unfortunately, I think Rings is screwed... Actually though, reading your great writing always does inspire me, so I'm off to work on Rings, skipping the lemon. Thanks for the great chapter and motivation, hope you break your writer's block soon! We're all waiting on pins and needles. (Some of us more litereally than others.... OW! Lanie, quit it!) Okay, ja ne, and tell 'Kura that Yami torture is fine and all, but he'd better start musing more or Trelane is going to have a long, painful (and not in the good way) chat with him...
Ja! ~~,~'~~{@

Good Dream, Evil Cliffhanger!

It will be interesting to see what Malik is up to. Most likely play both ends off the middle so he can gain power and laugh too... 8-)

What...man..no you can't do that to me (rummages at back of fridge for old vegetables). What an total evil cliffie. Fantastic chapter though they really are the perfect couple and you wrote it beautifully. Love the dream idea, a nice way to get them together without them knowing. Yami really is the perfect gentleman. You have to update soon. Yami's going to kick Kages ass. Right?

Yami SSF: *Readying overripe fruit and veggies*
SSF: No, Yami...if you pelt her, she might not write the next chapter!
Yami SSF: But evil cliffy...authoress must be punished...

Wonderful chapter! Loved the lemon, and the fact that because they both thought it nothing more than a dream, they could let down their inhibitions. And the fact that they might be on the verge of a breakthrough...if Yami can get to Yugi before Kage does!

Yami SSF: So please update quickly, or I will lob cyber tomatoes at you!
SSF: *Grabs yami and duct tapes her hands.* Ignore her. Update soon!