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by DracOnyx

person shy
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ever so very shyly sorry to bother you.again.....I'm not sure if this went through *shyly kicks computer*..I....I just wanted to say that well...I'm shyly sorry your weekend wasn't very good and that I..*blushes*...I shyly hope it gets better. Pretty shyly please keep up the good work on this fic....but at your own pace. I oh so shyly hope it has a happy ending *bites lower lip* One more shy thing and then I shyly promise to go....I..I just wanted to say that it's....well I shyly appreciate that someone else out there calls Marik's dark have Malik and Marik Marik.....I'm shyly sorry to have bothered you. *shyly dashes away*
person LadyGrey
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww.... so sweet, picturing 'Kura cuddling Yugi... *keeps tight reign on Lane to avoid any comments that could get us both killed* Well, like I said in my pre-review-review, I knew this would be a good chapter. I love that they can still talk when Yugi's in the hallway -- at least it's something. Can't wait for the next update, talk to you soon, *hugs*.
person Lady Laran
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MEAN CLIFFY!!!! Poor Yami and Yugi...I hope that Kage gets his...really and truly....hmmmm...maybe lock him in a closet full of rabid wombats or something.

UPDATE SOON!!!

*Glomp* love the story and really enjoy chatting with you
person LadyGrey
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHH!!! Holy Ra, Drac, that was so mean! Very well written, as always, but MEAN! Really though, great idea to force open the link, and have 'Kura trying to close it. Poor -- hell, poor everyone! Please please send more angst. As much as we hate it, we love it more. Hee hee, talk to ya later. Off to read Roses now! Ja!
person Cathrath
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool, you updated and really quickly. Man i really want to go an give Kage a good kick (i know me and everyone else). Poor Yami, and Yugi having to suffer as well ...again. It going to take a lot to break Yami but how much more can he take. Yugi loves Yami so badly but unless he can get over what Kage did to him hows he going to win. This story just gets better and better. Please keep up with the quick updates i'm right on the edge of my seat here. Oh, and i've still got the veg out so please no more cliffies my nerves just can't take it :-).
person Silvershadowfire
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was NASTY! Excellent chapter... But God Kage's nasty, using the link against them.
I don't know why Yami's apologizing...he didn't have anything to do with it. Please update when you can!
person Lady Laran
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay..that bastard has to die!!! Excellent update..I can't believe how HORRIBLE that Kage is! Don't leave us hanging too long!!!
person zombiedarkelf18
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this story is so cool your a great writer please update soon.
person Silvershadowfire
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man. Kage has Yami...this is SO not good. He needs time to heal, not time at the hands of that psycho. To be perfectly honest, I think rape is the least of Yami's worries at this point. He almost gave in to Kage's wiles once - and that was when he was more or less whole. This...could get very nasty. I want to read more! Onegai?

As for the fuel for creative fires... Just ask - e-mail and bounce ideas off me if you like.

Je ne!
person LadyGrey
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ACK! 'Kura, you moron, don't /spell out/ how Kage is going to torture Yami to Yugi! Great chappie dear, can't wait for the next one. Off to read the rest of your updates, ja ne!