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I tell you girl you’ve got my up most admiration at coping with all the shirt life keeps throwing at you. The fact your musses keep heading to hills is perfectly understandable. Keep up with the writing though your most definably at the top of my favourite authors list, you really do have the gift. I'm attempting to write my first lemon at the moment and the pile of screwed up paper behind me just keeps getting bigger. Right on with the review. This chapter is no exception to the others, absolutely fantastic. You can really feel Yugi's pain and i have to admit i cried a bit..ok i'm girl enough to admit it. It really can go either way, looks both hopeless and at the same time there's hope, really well written. This fic absolutely has to have a happy ending, it’s written all over it. This fic would go off my charts of if you made it a happy ending. PLEASE MAKE IT A HAPPY ENDING....gets down on keens and begs. Don't normally result to this level of pleading with a writer but the chance you might not make it a happy ending has driven me to it, you've got me hooked and i will reduce to a puddle of tears if you make it a sad ending. You wouldn't do that to me, would you? I just won't be able to cope (OK, is that a suitable amount of begging, grovelling, pleading and attempt a guilt tripping to convince you :-) ). Really looking forward to the next chapter.

Well, that is what happens when you block off all exits but one. At least they forced Kage to rejoin with Yami before he'd broken him. Maybe there is still hope that Yugi and Yami together can beat the shadow.

Thanks for the chapter!

Theres no way Bakura can save you this time.......Digs in fridge for slighly off and squishy vegetables - execpt can't find any because she dosn't eat them. ANOTHER CLIFF HANGER damit im already on fighnail hold at the moment any more and i'm going to drop right off. I really through Kage was going to get Yugi, talk about leaving it right to the last minute. How on earth is Yami going to survive rejoining with Kage. His mind is going to overload. Plese don't leave it to long or i'm going to drop off the cliff in frustration.

damn, i've been reading this fanfic for a long time and it's pure angst, give Yami and Yuugi a break man!!! ^^

lol i won't kill you! makes for a good twist. Hmmm wonder how they are going to fix this now?

Ever so very shyly sorry to bother you...I....well...I just had to...after I shyly picked my shy self up off the floor....I had to shyly say that oh my goshness I'm so shyly jealous of your talent. Pretty shyly please I'm sorry and.....I shyly hope .....well...even though I don't know you I'm so shyly sorry for your real life troubles. I shyly wish I could make them all better. *shyly runs away*

I'm not gonna kill you but OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! The two rejoined? What's gonna happen? DAMN GOOD CHAPPY!!!

I don't normally leave reviews. I know, it's terrible. But I love reading your stories here. And you said you needed reviews. You are the best author I have come across on the whole internet! I actually lose sleep because I stay up too late reading your fics. Late at night is the only time I have to do anything on my own. I love your writting style and even the lemons. In most fics the lemons have no purpose to the story and I usually just skip over them. But yours always have a point. You describe what the character is feeling and how they are changing inside. For example, in 'Gravitation' (great fic!) Malik used sex to almost destroy Yami, but then Ryou uses sex to heal him. It wasn't just some random pointless sex scene that the author felt like plopping in, it had a very important purpose in the changes Yami went through. Same thing in 'Going On.' I really like how you describe the characters' felings in a way that is comlex, like real emotions, but still easy to understand. This really adds to your stories. I always hate it when in the middle of a very good fic, the author decides to put a very descriptive, sometimes distasteful sex scene when the story would be just as good or better without it. Anyways, that is what I think of your writting. You have awesome plots, and great everything basically. I love all your fics. Keep up the good work. I, on the other hand, am terrible at writing, as you can maybe tell just by reading this. I am in high english classes, but barely passed this one state writting test thing. So I will never bother poor readers with my undescriptive, confusing, boring pointless crap. It is basically everything opposite of your work. So keep writting!!! Please!!! I hope this review helps you recover from your 'hellish' weekend. Love ya.

I'm terribly sorry to hear about your difficulties with your husband, and I hope something works out for you.

As for the story - I thought I was going to cry at the very end, when Yami and Yugi are so close and so far. Yami's passive resistance is a perfect stragety...Kage can't break him as long as Yugi is safe. Greatest strength and greatest weakness...I just hope Yugi's promise holds when Kage offers his devil's bargain.

Good luck, and I'll pray for you.

Ever so very shyly sorry to bother you...I....I just wanted to say that well...I'm shyly sorry your weekend wasn't very good and that I..*blushes*...I shyly hope it gets better. Pretty shyly please keep up the good work on this fic....but at your own pace. I oh so shyly hope it has a happy ending *bites lower lip* One more shy thing and then I shyly promise to go....I..I just wanted to say that it's....well I shyly appreciate that someone else out there calls Marik's dark have Malik and Marik Marik.....I'm shyly sorry to have bothered you. *shyly dashes away*