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for Going On

by DracOnyx

person ladywolf_Terri
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes..my soul sister you are evil!! *LOL* Great job!! Now you have to update this soon!!..^_~
person Lady Laran
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hand twitches to move towards the wombat kennel and finds that she has been pounced and pinned by Yugi and Yami* Now I know why you made me promise not to throw anything! lol....better get a move on with the next chappy though because I want that happy ending! Great installment, Drac...

See..no wombats!!! :-p
person ~!~Shelly~!~
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!Before your eyes is the sadest chapter ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AHHHHH RITE MORE>>>YA GOTTA RITE MORE X.X
bye
person Angel Kawaii
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*wah* This is soo sad! I love it! Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens. Ja ne!
person cathrath
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That bomb shelter is not going to help this time. Oh man what a cliff hanger, it is isn't (reviewer gives puppy dog eyes at Author). Kage is dead GOOD. what a bastard but Yami had better not be (chews fingers nails). Puzzle's still got to play a part right? AAAHH to many unanswered questions
person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!! THEY DID IT! Granted it was by total accident, and if Yugi hadn't solved the Puzzle and Yami stepped past his fears, they would have lost. But Yami's back in the puzzle, right? And Kage's dead. (I hope I'm right, anyway.)

Oh. btw - if you want a beta reader, I'm available. I noticed a couple glitches in the text - nothing major.

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks!
person Usagilikesduochan
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head and grins as much as she is able to after reading such a story* Don't think that I will believe for one second that Seto just stabbed Yami's body, because I won't. I even refuse to. :p Woah, this story really IS angsty as hell. I always loved a good portion of angst and drama but... you just... woah, WOAH, this is even too much for my poor heart. I think I died at last ten times from a heart attack per chapter. And there are really people out there who call ME evil for my cliffhangers. But... do I allow for Yami to be dragged apart from Yuugi when they were just about to finally come to terms with each other? ^^; That was a really mean thing to do from you. But HELL did I enjoy reading those chapters, especially the lemon there. ^^ Anyway, with that scene with Yami in the latest chapter, him just going through the door after overcoming his own fears and pain, I really won't believe that you kill him off now. There were no signs that he was sharing his body with Kage. From the description it sounded more like the had something of a link, but nothing more. If I am guessing right here I would just be veeeeeery sorry, that Kage had never the chance to learn that Yami is quite well and will not join him to hell. ^^

Anyway, I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter. This story really has me bound to its feet. I am glued to it and waiting for the next chapter to come out hopefully soon. ^^


*UsagiLovesDuochan /`^_^´\
person Chaos Dragon
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn wow, that was a great chapter! lol but i guessed that put a damper on the gang's plans. Can't wait to read more!! that was an evil ending lol
person Stargazer7281
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHHHH, so far so awesome. I'm in love with this story. I can imagine all kinds of separate directions this story could go from here. Although I do have a good idea how a happy ending would work out, it may not be the happy ending. You are a wonderful writer and I look forward to seeing where you take us with the next chapter.
person shy
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*looks shyly at the bomb shelter door before revieving a poke from her muse to knock* Um...pretty shyly please I'm really very sorry....I...I just *gets another poke and a whispered "go on" in her ear* I just wanted to shyly say that this fic.....shy wowness. I .....I really am shyly jealous. Um.....pretty shyly please I hope you feel better and I'm really shyly sorry to have bothered you *shyly grabs her muse's hand and breaks into a run away from the bomb shelter before the authoress can send a tomb robber or Seph after them*