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by DracOnyx

person Cathrath
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:-0 Somehow picks jaw up off floor and then does impressive impersonation of a gold fish for several minutes.............................................................................
That was.....I can't think of anything to say (which is rare for me :-0)

EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL

You owe me a box of tissues beacuse i used them all........i might waver the debt if post the promised chapter soon or i could hire a fighter jet and come after you. That bombshelter won't last for ever :-)
person Shinigami24
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shaking head* Now I can see why DracOnyx went into hiding...This chappie is way too angsty! Yugi, your death would hurt your friends! Besdies Yami wouldn't want you to kill yourself! He'ld want you to LIVE!
person Tashica
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHHAAAAAAAAAAAAT?! but...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! *holds out offering of Creme Horns* I promise I wont kill ya, this offering is proof of that...BUT YA CANT JUST LEAVE IT THERE!! YOU JUST CANT!!!!! Its...Its...ITS NOT FAIR!!!

person Angel Kawaii
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*wipes tears* Ahhh! He can't! Please don't Yugi! You'll only cause more pain! *breaks into sobs* Please help him!!! Update soon. Ja
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you are an evil woman!! XD...Great job!!
person Sansi
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT *gives creme horns* Come out!!! I promise I won't hurt you - not too much at least!!!!! ARGHHH

How could you leave it there ;_; Please please consider a sequel
person Lady Laran
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Must reach...wombats!!! *struggles under the dogpile of Yugi and Yami* Tell me you are not leaving it like this, girl!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay..I know what you were thinking..sorta..but you seriously can't end it like that!!! *huggles* Glad you updated!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SSF: Oh DracOnyx...it's your favorite stalker...come out come out wherever you are...
Yami SSF: She's not going to come out, baka hikari. And after than chapter I can see why.
SSF: Fine. I'll do it the other way. *falls to knees outside the bombshelter* PLEASE DON'T LEAVE IT THERE! *Puppy dog eyes* I'll give you creme horns and plushies...just please don't leave us hanging! I just want another chapter...or a sequel...or an epilogue...or SOMETHING!
Yami Bakura *peeking out from the bomb shelter* Is she always like this?
Yami SSF: *Sighs and rolls eyes.* You have no idea...
person Cathrath
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELL NO YOUR NOT DOING THAT TO ME.......You have...AAAAAAHHH (That was me dropping off the cliff, i just couldn't hold on anymore). If i start chanting SEQUAL, SEQUAL in a really annoying manner will you continue PLEASE. Despite my almost inhuman desperate need for a happy ending for Yugi and Yami and i really hope they get one finally in the sequal. Might i just say that was a fantastic last chapter. Neither one way or the other but just happily settled in the middle. Man you really know how to torture us :-). Poor Yugi he's so lost without Yami. Please don't let him do it. Yami's still there right....he'll stop him from doing the stupid thing...... My nerves just can't take this. Please do a sequal and soon my dramatic plundge was stopped by a conveniant branch so i'll be around to read and review...just don't leave me to long...think of my safety if not my sanity. Great work
person shy
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*knocks quietly at the bombshelter door before leaving a note and creme horn and shyly running away*
Note: Ever so shy and quiet yay for updateness.....but oh poor everyone. I shyly want to just reach through the computer screen and pull them all into a shy firece hug. Pretty shyly please keep up the good work and oodles of shy sorries for disturbing you.