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well, it could have been the end. Course I love to read endings like this... hehehe 8-)

No torches here...

O.o THANK GOD THAT ISNT THE END!!!!!!!!!! if it was, i would have to sharpen my pitchfork and hunt you down. *cough* Anyway, amazing story, (i know its silly, but i love happy endings.....hint hint)

*glares* (It may looks funny, but she still tries)

I might forgive you for fooling us, but only if we get the real ending soon. And well, if we are not pleased, we probably get Yami to help us torture you

*wink*

AAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAA!!!! THAT WASN;T THE REAL ENDING?!??!! shoot, it totally rocked, tough!! honestly, i don't know why people send flames unnecesarily, i mean if you wrote with a lot of spelling mistakes or the storyline was really bad, then the writer can b corrected politely, even so i liked your ending, not because i enjoyed it, but mainly because all the story so far was angst from beginning to end! although i would prefer the real happy ending ^____^ there's only one thing i didn't like, personally i believe there's only one heaven (or paradise or such) or place for the afterlife, so it didn't convinced me too much the thingye about egytpyan heaven and christian one (and i'm not an obsessed follower), it DID give the extra amount of sadness to the story (never reunited again, man, that really sucks! >_<)

Hi Drac. It's a long story as to why Shy is having her best friend type her review. Short version: No more annoying shyness if she tells me what she wants to say. Anyway....here is Shy's review:

"You had me completely. I was almost crying. I would have if my folks hadn't been home but they are and they wouldn't understand. I'm in complete shock. Poor everyone."

Shy actually had a lot more to say but the train derailed. She is really grateful for the update and for your offer of her to shyly drop you a line. It made her day. Thanks from both of us and take care.

You'd better be so GLAD I promised that I wouldn't throw wombats! That was cruel and heartless....DAMN girl, you are too good!!! I'm really happy you're not gonna end it like that because it'd just be too horrible!!! lol


UPDATE...!!!!!!!!!

You're so MEAN >.< I was about to start crying there man!!! Ugh... hurry T___T Rock ON with ya bad self.

Gaaah, somehow I just can't believe that Yami is death. I think it's not just Yuugi's mind playing trick on him. ^^ If it was, why bother with the whole scene of Yami going through that door? And wasn't he told that he would live then if he pass that test? *tries to remember* Anyway, I hope Yuugi will not be able do what he is about to do. At last not before it is really confirmed that Yami is dead, which I am still doubting. This is also the reason why I am not about to kill you yet. ^^ I will wait till we know it's reeeeeeally true. But for now, I am still positive that Yami IS in the puzzle, maybe just too weak to really contact Yuugi. *sighs* Somehow this whole scene now starts to remind me of Romeo and Juliet. *groans* I just hope the ending will be a lot better, happy end. After all, how could someone be so cruel to leave Ryou and Malik with their Yamis and Yuugi is supposed to be left alone? ^^;

The chapter was enjoyable by the way. I could really feel with Yuugi. His pain, the pain of his friends, the desperation. Very well written, well done chapter.


*UsagiLovesDuochan /`^_^´\

*LMAO*..*huggles* Great job!!

I knew that couldn't be the end. Yami's still in the Puzzle, damnit. I know he is... He's just not strong enough yet to talk to Yugi. But I bet he'll find a way to communicate with someone before Yugi dies. Please update soon! *Puppy eyes*

Yami SSF: Well, I'm woman enough to admit you fooled me.

SSF: Put the knife away, yami.

Yami SSF: No.

SSF: I'm not going let you stab the author.

Yami SSF: Who said I was going to use it on her? This is for Marik's father in Dark Roses.