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for Going On

by DracOnyx

person LadyGrey
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAACCCCKKKKK!!!! Oh, Kami, obviously I got AFF working again, and Wow, hot chapter.... all right, must be off, but love you and your fics, please please update again soon, hope you have happy holidays, and mmmm...... please update soon. This waiting for Yami and Yugi to see each other is absolutely killing me. Ja ne!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooo. Interesting twist. Looks like Malik might have decided to join the good guys side...now if he can just get away with double-crossing Kage...
Great chapter! I loved the scene with Yami facing all his friends, and hearing from their own lips that they don't blame him. It's wonderful. :)
person Deb
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo excellent chapter huni!
Great lemon scene too!!
I hope Yami will begin to feel normal again with his friends, but i guess that wont happen..
Please update again soon huni!!!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person pluto
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The format of the latest chapter is messed up a bit, but reading it was definately worth the effort. Hope you post more soon!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No, I am not stalking you. I'm just a rabid fan. :)
Anyway, another great chapter. I love how you take the characters and make them so human, with faults and desires and emotions, while still remaining true to the character. This is a great talent.
Until next chapter!
person LadyGrey
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, it's great to have your writing back. What can I say, great chapter (if a bit short -- hey, short's better than not at all tho!) and we're waiting on pins and needles for the next update. I'm glad to hear it's going to be longer than GI, gotta love stories that take time to develop plot and twists. Ja ne!
person Deb
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Go Ryou, make old Yams see sense!
Great chapter huni!!!
I loved it!!!
Please please update again soonies!!!
Much luv and huggles!
Debs xxx
person Lady Laran
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for a while for you to update this. I was very excited to see the next installment. Great job on portraying so much emotion in both Yami and Yugi. It'd be interesting to see if Malik is right about this situation. Yugi and Yami are opposite sides of one coin. What better to illuminate the darkness than the light that is certain of both himself and the one who loves him. I don't think darkness can conquer darkness in this one. Don't know but please update when you can! I really enjoyed it!
person Sansi
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah ... this is really different than the last time ... so much better. Though I have one quesion: Are Yugi and Marik (or Malik I don't know at the moment who the hikari is) together?
person Silvershadowfire
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Here's hoping that this review gets to you.

Just found this story; boy am I glad AFF is allowing uploads again. I was thrilled when you used my suggestion for Kage's name - it just seemed to suit. The sequel is excellent, and I am looking forward to this story! Please put me on the list of people you e-mail when you post again! Thanks.