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September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Damm that its. I want mute hut seeming sex between then lol
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutely marvelous!!i can't believe someone with such writing cabibility!you are one to envy sir (or ma'am,sorry)and i sincerely hope you write many more chapters and other epic stories.and if i may be granted one request,could you put kaibaboy's(i had to call him that,lol,sorry) point of view in the chapters?it would be most appreciated.well,best of luck!although you obviously don't need it.
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do a third chappie please! You've done wonderful!
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn't get a chance to review when I read this at school so I came back to review now! I loved this, it was very orgasmic!!! Although, I don't think it was wise to read this before I had lunch and had no access to a bathroom, but whatever.
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps like fuck*
*claps for fuck*
*claps for fuck*
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I liked the descriptiveness of this one and how things transitioned into one another. I'm not a fan of first-person, but that's just me. ^ ^; You should write another chapter where Kaiba returns the favor. >D
And I'm sorry to nit-pick, but I don't think school cafs in Japan would sell pizza and ice cream; they tend to stick to more traditional fare. Then again, that whole Joey-fantasizing scene wouldn't have worked. XD
Betty
And I'm sorry to nit-pick, but I don't think school cafs in Japan would sell pizza and ice cream; they tend to stick to more traditional fare. Then again, that whole Joey-fantasizing scene wouldn't have worked. XD
Betty
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe. Me likey!!
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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey the lemon was great. Keep it up. I hope there is more to this. Keep it up.
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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Do the 'Seto has his way with Joey' chapter! Hehe...um, pwese? You did a great lemon-lime scene, I'd love to see a full lemon.^^
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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Actually its not that hard to daydream about lol but if you want to make it easy just pretend you have a dick and no virgina and no boobs and there ya go * no i do not do that but i know some people who have *coughmyfriendlibbycough* lol but know what also helps reading alot of yaoi read bakurasgirl's stories that will majiorly help better yet go to her site go to yahoo type in bakurasgirl hit search and its the first one bakurasgirls shrine go to fanfiction and it has all her stories make sure you read it in order also one warning one story took me 5 10hour days *i didnt read it when i went to on tuesday and thursdays cause i crashed asleep on the bed when i got home in colloge long story for later if ya want anyways* strait to read it there really long but really good! hey do you think you can write a malik*hikari* and marik*yami* yaoi?waysways gatta go ja mata!