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GYAHHHH!...WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!...WHAT IS JOU'S REACTION?! I MUST KNOW!...*ahem*...actually, I might have reviewed once before for this same fic; I liked it so much I came here to read it again only to be disgruntled by the absence of a conclusion..yet again! Please say you will continue! If not, the world is missing out because the plot was very original and your writing style is really good. I especially liked the first chapter in which he was so absent-minded that he missed the opening later sign...that would be something I'd do! Anyway, "Too bad...or not?''...I think not...^_^...ja!

i love this please email me when you update thankx!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for the update. LOVE this. MaggieMay

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, this story is great.
This whole Mokuba teaching Kaiba thing is just so funny (I woke my parents cause it's in the middle of the night and I couldn't help laughing).
And the whole Mai-Joey twist is great too. It's not like I want them to be together, just... it makes it all so interesting. Kaiba being jealous and all...
I hope the two of them being together is just a misunderstanding though (cause no matter how you look at it, if they were, it would be stealing, period. And stealing is bad. bad bad bad!)... a misunderstanding would be so much funnier anyway.
Uhm.. what else? oh, yeah! I like your writing style!
Keep going... this is good (and to the other readers.... those 8 - in letters EIGHT!!!!!!! - reviews are just not enough people, this deserves better! you know it!)!!!!!

I LOVE IT! ^^;;...it's so cute..lol..who knew Mokuba would end up teaching Seto something..? XD..my how the tables have turned..XD...it's a very cute idea, so please don't stop writing ;-)

Please update soon. I love this plot.

Wow... this is really good. I like how you've set up the story so far. I really think that you should go on. I also think that you should make it a tad difficult for Seto to get Mai out of Joey's life... It would be a little more amusing that way... Maybe you could have Seto and Mai duel for Joey? That would be kind of funny though. :D Good work.

Another great start. This one shows great promise. Please continue.

Thanks for the clarifying the Blonde/Blond thing!! Because when I first read that part my first reaction was, "OK, If the author changed Jou into a "girl" I'm done!!"

But you didn't it's just Mia. (Thankies)
Oh and continue please, we wouldn't want Jou with Mia (shivers). ~Ivy~

you should update. this seems like it could become a good one-shot story type of thing. I really hope you dont go into a Mai and Jou story...that would be aweful to do...poor Seto. Well looking forward to ur update.