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by Aten

person BuffyM
schedule May 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aww i could never hurt marik!*finally hands him his rod back,after bashing anzu unconcious w/steven*Marik:My rod!!*hugz*
Anzu:hits in the head are like..friend..uhh...what was it again?
All:Nothing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BuffyM:Well I'm glad that there was so much lemony goodness,uh oh aten anda fia find something they shouldn't at kaiba corp?i wonder what it is lol probably many many many many many sex toys lol.and some whipped cream! and..lots of baby oil! lolmm seto and whipped cream
*walks off*Oh seeettttooo!!!!!!XD
Steven:*tries to get up gets knocked back unconcious by...Yugi?!!!
Yugi:That's for trying to hurt all of us!
Yami:Never seen this side of you aibou.*smirks*i like it!
*picks yugi up and runs off grinning evily uh well not evil but lol you know wh mea mean!!*
person lupusdragon
schedule May 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: * blushing * well that was just embarrassing.
LD: That was friggin' funny as hell!
Karen: It was _aweful_
LD: Oh it wasn't that bad. Just don't think about it too much, next time won't be as bad.
Karen: Ugh, I couldn't even read that straight through, I was blushing so much.
LD: Hehehehe
Karen: Oh shut up.
person KEYSHA
schedule May 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*falls over hysterically laughing* OH MY GOD!!!! They got into Joey and Seto's sex toys!!! ON MY GOD!!!! I laughed so hard I got choked when I saw that and spit out my soda on the floor!!!! I thought for a minute RYou was gonna kick Seto's ass!!! Seto can yell at him but you NEVER raise your voice to a child, especially if it's not your kid!! Seto will know from now on!!! Please add more soon...this was funny as hell!!!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Seto and Joey should know better.
DD: Yep..if kids AREN'T supposed to get into something, they're gonna.
YD: Take it from us.
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule May 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Does Aten have two different color eyes?
person TheMysticalDragon
schedule May 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
UGH Seto... dont be such a JERK!!!
person aten
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story. ever since the nanny bakura story i've thought u were a great author, and i mean GREAT. u'r stories are so compelling and catchy, with cliffy's and great detail. it'd b really kool if sum1 would draw aten and aria! i'd luv 2 c wut they look like ( even thou hav have my own image inside my mind) great story and keep up the good work!

little-yugi or ai (on ff.net >.<)
person AngelicMouseGirl
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's all about the lemons! ^_^ Yeah! Okay, that dream thing freaked me out and I'm sooooooooooo glad you put his dad in jail. He totally deserved it. ^-^ Can't wait for more! LEMON CHAPPY SOON PLEASE! Arigato! ^-^ Ja ne!
person Falling Leaves
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm... Lemon Piiieee.... O_o;
Yay! Guilty! Guilty as pie! >.<;;; LEMON PIE! aaaahhhhh!
Sorry. Mmm... Lemon..... mmmm.... *twitch*
One question, why don't Aten and Aria go to school? Is it because of their growth?
person Falling Leaves
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gah! My last review was cut short because I forgot that the tags did that... -.-
Mm.. Lemon.
Just one question, why don't A&A go to school? Is it because of their growth?