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for Baby of Mine

by Aten

person Danae2120
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sob*

Malik! He's dead? Noo! And Marik is left without his lover.niffniffs* That's so sad. And Aten and Aria...*walks off crying*
person hato-chiisai
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O_O
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NO! Malik can't be gone! *is crying irl* He just can't be! You gotta make him alive justjust have toniffniff* My fave bishie is dead now...no fair!! Please bring him back!
person The Mystical Dragon
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::huggles Ryou.. and everyone:: Ohhh nooooo :::::GLARES AT ANUBIS::::: YOU SORRY BASTARD! ::: tries CPR on malik again:::: i hope things get better.... :sob:
person Rhysenn Bakura
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH my god.
I've been reading this story since The Fall of Icarus, and they're the two best stories I've ever read! ( pushed timetime here, can't talk in detail ) Sorry I haven't reviewed before.
DID MALIK DIE?!?!?!
Pleas say no, please please please say no....
person bluesummers
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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how could you.........*sob*...wahhhhhhh....*sob*..........why?......
:(bluesummers & yamigralnak
person strangewind
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi liked your storie its geting btter as you go . have a question sort of suggist jen are you goine t ever have yami and bakuraand marik kiss and make up . you try being frends cal a truceits been five thousand years I think it would be cool and are you going to fih the duel later. thanks
person Tiamat
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yipee lol I am just happy that Ryou isnt being forced to live with his father, and I know the children wouldnt be in his care long, after all you get Bakura and Marik angry and you got maybe 2 days tops to live :P
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: HEHEHE!! Yami play with dolls!! *falls over laughing*
DD: It was so cute when Aria gave Aten her bunny.
YD: They SO need to kick Anubis' ass!!
DD: And soon!!
person Danae2120
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Aria is a sweetheart when that jerk Cinetti isn't making her do bad things. *hugs Aria*