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by Aten

person bluesummers
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............lemon...........mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........good....
YamiGralnak:*slaps blusesummers*
Bluesummers: owww*rubs his cheak*
YamiGralnak:What he's trying to say is that he cant wait for the next chapter!
Bluesummers: yeah....*continues to rub his cheak*....what he said....
:)BLUESUMMERS & YAMIGRALNAK!
hey look even Gralnak's here to say something!
Gralnak: in the words of, well, me.....HOT DAMN!
GRALNAK & YAMIGRALNAK & BLUESUMMERS: HOT DAMN!
:)GRALNAK
person lupusdragon
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Yay! One big happy family * sniffle *
LD: I love when Rhea gets involved. Ryou has a great mom.
Karen: The chibi babies are so cute.
LD: ^________________^ Marik is so caring. He is going to take care of Malik, hehehe
Karen: I love happy endings.
LD:is nis not over yet!
person Elys
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Elys
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
( looks at coumputer strangly ) i didn't push the review button............. oh well THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so glad you broght him back!!!!!!^_^ oh and i absolutly wuv your story and of cors you!^_^
person hato_chiisai
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lol I love that. How do we get back? Uhhh....... Does this mean that Aris and Aten had their own souls the whole time and tht Cinetti was just along for the ride like a yami? I thought they WERE Cinetti. If that was so, then destroying Cinetti's soul would have destroyed their souls as well........ o_O Okay, I've done my heavy thinking for the day. I LOVE ATEN!!!! ^_^
person Elys
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
(sobing as she wright this ) PLEASE PLEASE I OF YOU DON'T KILL MALAK OR HOW EVER THE HELL YOU SPELL HIS NAME PLEASE DON'T KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DON'T KILL HIM PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(Can't countiun to typ because she is sobing so hard that she can barly see the screen)
person bluesummers
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hummm....I not sure what to say about that chapter..........uhhhh......soul crush?????
:}BLUESUMMERS & YAMIGRALNAK
person AngelicMouseGirl
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YOU KILLED MALIK!!!! OMG!! HOW COULD YOU!?!! That made me cry...the whole chappy... ;_; I hope you update soon and it doesn't have another death...of one of the people we lanywanyways. Sooo MORE! Arigato! Oyasumi Nasai!^_^
person Kaede
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
... ... I am ... ... so ... ... darn ... ... stunned .
Yo
You didn't REALLY kill Malik did you? I hope not...but still

Well this is good...but I don't think Mind Crush kills people does it?
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Malik's safe!! *hugs Malik tightly* He better not leave them again. Now thanettnetti is gone things should be better. I have a question. Since Aria and Aten were infants in the underworld, does that mean that they will come back with Malik and the rest? I hope so! They are so cute! I want em myself!