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for Baby of Mine

by Aten

person hato_chiisai
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::sniffles:: that was beautiful........
person Tiamat
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thats sooooooooooooooooooo coool! hehe they bad guys finally got what they deserved two down and one more to go, well two if you count the son of that evil jerk. Was that foreshadowing by the way? Are Ryou and Marik going to be with Bakura and Malik forever?
person Rhea
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the sweetest lemons I've ever read. Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter and the sequel.
person Falling Leaves
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*cooes* So cute. What a happy chapter. ^.^ I missed the Chibis.
person Falling Leaves
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mmm... lemon....

oOo! So the epilogue's next? THEN the sequel? *oOo*
person BuffyM
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay lemony goodness!
you better write a sequel!! $(#$%(^(#$(^#$_^#$)%^#@)$(*@#(%#@$*%^*)#$%*
lol
person The Mystical Dragon
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwww... I know things are getting better.... more chibi Aten and Aria... yes!!!! ::Huggles the Chibis::
person Mira-chan
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sugoii!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't _WAIT_ for more of this!!!!

KIRIKO: *giggles* Ryou-kun's kids are sooooooooooooooooooooo kawaii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SERI: Steven Bakura is an evil bastard... >.< *thwaps Steven several times*

*helps her muse thwap Steven* Jerk, jerk, jerk, jerk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >.<

KIRIKO: Agreed! *thwaps*

SERI: *grin grin grin* ^_______^

Anyway... I'll be watching closely for the next chapter now that my comp and this site are getting along... ^^

KIRIKO: *smiles and hugs the babies and their moms* ^_^

SERI: I hope you work in some more Anzu bashing before this fic ends! That's funny!!!

There is a LEMON next chappie!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *drools at the thought of a lemon* ^___________________________^

KIRIKO: *innocent look* Don't you have homework to finish before school starts Mira-sama?

SERI: *snickers*

What?! KUSO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *runs around panicking* Gotta gooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OO *runs off with her snickering muses following*
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: *jumps up and down clapping* WOOHOO!
YD: And to top it off...there's gonna be a lemon next chappie!
DD: *rolls eyes*
person Falling Leaves
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*happy tears* Malik's back... evil dudes are gone... Malik's back...