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Awww! Marik and Malik are finally so gently and kind ach ach other now. I am so proud of them. *teardrop* And another side of story, Ryou. MY GOD. I thought Preg. women eat alot later in month, but JUST beginning?! Gee. And also Ryou so demand women. lol Poor Bakura. Deal with nine month of seeing Ryou eating strange food that he never thought or see his Hikari eat. I just hopefully she won't start get SO hurguy as she will go after Anzu's Crab. lmao If she doe, Bakura, You need to find a rope or chain and lock her up. lol She will go crazy. That not a good sign. lol As for Ra, I wonder what Marik newfound job going to be. :) Also, if Bakura going to court for Ryou, will they find Bakura different and not right. I hate to see Steven get his side favor win over Bakura and Ryou. If so, I will go after Steven myself and MURDER HIM and I don't care I get lock up. I be like... I did you Bakura and Ryou a favor. Have nice day. Death row, here I come. lol Anyway, I hope you like my gift. :) I know Marik not going to be please with me. lmao Tough s**t Marik. I think it look so cute for the boy. lol Just make sure ya know which one your and his. lol Good luck write my Ra and have good day.

Aw...that was a sweet lemon. Marik's taken a turn the theter,ter, eh? Too bad he has to get a job. Can't wait for those chapters.

OH NO!! Marik getting a job?! You know, I know expactly what look good for Marik as job. He can be a police. Why I said that? If a bad guy running from the law, ALL he have to do is.. *sigh* and pull out his rod(I ain't going for a joke here. lmao) and used that to control the running away bad guy. He don't need a gun, wacking stick(Not what you think it is. lol), and handcuff. All he need is his rods uns unforim(I wonder how sexy he look in the police clothes), and the badge! Just imgaine that. :P But that just my suggestion for 5000 year old spirit who used to be a ex-tomb robber. BTW, here my gift for the Two kid.
One for the girl is a shirt of pic of of Yu-Gi-Oh in fluffy style. So Anime clothes style. Inside picture of Black Man gin girl look cuddle as she picking up the rose as well with Change of Heart is playing with Exodia who is a sweet sweet looking unharmful person as playing tag each other as well the blue eye white dragon flying in the air growling as might, but not scarey.
Second for the boy is a man-make rattle that look like... *can't said it as trying to open it mouth* Marik's Rod. No power, just simple rattle. THAT will drive Marik NUT!!! ;) What else that could drive Marik nut? That Malik job. He can simple tease him with the horny level. :P That the best he can do.
Anyway, that my gift, and here my other gift. A picture of Marik holding Ryou from behind as Bakura is holding Malik from behind as both of them is holding hand as so as Ryou and Malik is outside from it house as showing how much they care and look out for each other. As they make a prefect bond for each other. :) This picture is for Marik, Bakura, Malik, and Ryou. :) As well, this: *A card I hand into them* is a card that symbol of true love.. Is a picture of that Yugi gave it to Reb. While she is a annoy girl who want her blue eye white dragon back. Plu-ese. As this symbol also that I am favor for Yami and Yugi so much, but I am getting more into Bakura and Marik and they Hikari. ^-^ Both of them show the true love as I wish I could have for my own. :) My bond for their bond. I hope that make them grow great together.
Oh, and here... *a dog Tag with a remote* This is for Anzu, put this on her neck and whatever you find her annoy, just push this button as create a shock for her neck. :P lmao It for dog, but I think a dog is even SMARTER than her. lmao Anyway, keep up the good creation my Ra. Marik, good luck finding a job. Bakura keep up the good safety for Ryou life. And for those Hikari, You two behave and have good time in school. ^-^ I best to leave you people. Have good day and good luck.

Oh gee. It IS going to be a LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG time. I feel sorry for poor Ryou. Look like it going to be a Bakara's manhood Vs. Marik's manhood. I KNEW it was a bad idea for them to have sex with Ryou. God. I know Ryou was so horny, but yet why can Bakara take the women womb and Marik take the backdoor? lol It can be shareable! lmao!! No. It alway will be for Bakara and only Bakara. But I hate to see what happen if this happen to be Marik is a father. I don't think Bakara going to be gentlemen for while. Or yet, How can be possible if this could be two! Marik AND Bakara. Can that be possible? Who know? Ryou could finally got a TWIN BABY!! YAY! lol But yet, I do not want to know what going to happen to the baby and Ryou's life. It going to be a very risky and dangerous. Ra have mercy on Ryou life and soul. Please be alive. Keep it up Ra, You doing good writing this story. ^-^ *thumb up* This is going to be the best and my favorite story of all time.

Damn! Even the whole gang should be an amsamed of themself. Looking at Ryou body. Poor Ryou. :( I bet he feeling like.. Ryou don't exsist. Just new Ryou. i hope no one going to change beharounround Ryou. Esp. Marik. Keep ya hand off. lmao Those are been belong to Bakara. :P lmao You know what I can't wait and see? A funny silly agurement when Ryou got his FIRST *cough up* Time of the month thing.

Ryou: Oh shut up. Ra I hope not. I heard alot thing from period thing... Please Marik and Bakara. Find that damn Chant before I get a... PERIOD. *shudder*

lol Just imagine that EVERYONE. :P It be so funny to watch Bakara like... Oh shit... Ryou ain't in the mood. And come to worse Anzu MIGHT come along and start pissing Ryou off about Period is Friendship. You know what? I wanna know who going out with Anzu. It be funny to watch a BF/GF suffer with Anzu. Oh! While you look up Chant Marik and Bakara, FIND THE WAY TO USE ON ANZU!!! lmao Ryou first, THEN Anzu! lol Keep it up my Ra! You doing so Great with the "Baby of Mine" It getting more and more awsome story. ^-^

Hey Bakurasgirl! I didn't know you had your fics here. Cool! This is farther than at mediaminer right now so I read it and now I want even more of course...I'm a greedy person when it comes to your fanfiction. ^_^ This is moving along so great and I hope there is more SUPER SOON! Arigato! Lemon!! Fast! ^^; Yay. Oyasumi Nasai!

it is wonderful
update a little bit faster won't you

Benu: I know that i am not supposed to say this but...

canyoupleasecutdownonfoursome

Nakht: she says that she is also very very very sorry if you consider this a flame ,
she did not mean to it is just that she does not have a flexible mind ,
still had not get use to the foursome pairing.
However she enjoys your story immensely but she prefers pairs and she says that she is immensely sorry again
au revoir

This is a tough time for Malik and Marik. I do feel the same thing if happen to me, but it a very confict problem. I am sure everyone love Ryou. Heck I do. lol But we all know we can't have Ryou. Ryou found someone that he cane be with and be protect by. :) That be Bakura. The dark angel. In fact, both word they follow. "Till death do apart." It a powerful word. I never suspect a mortal or immortal ever go back on it if they really mean it. It a sound phase. :) I just wish Marik think of it as same thing with his Light angel. Heck. I wonder if Marik and Malik should get married? ;) :D Hee Hee! I can imagine it now. Marik walk down on that asile with his tux. He be like, "Why the hell should I even wear this?" LMAO That be cute anf funny for Marik. :) All about trust. Trust is something you don't wanna doublt on or destory. :) I hope you a good luck working on it Marik. Not everyday you could lose trust easy and get it back that easy too. If there is, I would call it a lucky person. Keep it up Ra(Bakuraasgirl) It going to be interseting for me to keep reading this. Hee Hee. Good luck! *thumb up*