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for Baby of Mine

by Aten

schedule April 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
****Seto pulled Joey out of the kitchen.
Yami called out to him. “Yeah, go give your doggie a bone.”
Yugi blushed and slapped Yami’s sleeve again. “I wish you didn’t say that. That was so wrong!”
Yami laughed with his hikari. “Hey, this is Seto we’re talking about! He can take it like a man.”****

ROTFLMFAO!!!!!!! Sorry I haven't reviewed before now. I'm so bad about that. Anywho....I love this. You're doing such a great job. Never thought I would like a "preggie" fic with someone turning female, but you've proved me wrong. This is just great. :D
person AngelicMouseGirl
schedule April 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
;_; So very very sad...a lot of it. I hate Ryou's father. Plus I am pissed at mediaminer...it has not been working for me lately! Grrr.. baka site! I am glad this fic is here so I can read it still! Arigato! Ja ne! I for more soon! Always!
schedule April 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Yay Anzu bashing. hehehe Anzu voodoo doll!
LD: Yay for Yami's hentai jokes! That was too funny. Hehehehehehe
Karen: That was a really funny chappie, everything about it really.
LD: Yeah, and it is nice that the guy want to have a baby shower for Ryou! (S)he has such nice friends.
Karen: Ok, what is with the '(s)he' stuff?
LD: * glares * you do it too. Because you don't want to call Ryou "she" and thereby dash all of your fantasies...
Karen: * interrupting hastily * Ok, ok, sorry I asked! * blushes *
LD: * Grins * I win!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule April 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHAHA!!! That was SOOO funny! Seto...Joey...hehehehe...*falls over laughing*
person AngelicMouseGirl
schedule April 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Updating sooner is better than later. ^_^ You R Super Fab. Keep up the awesome work. I hope Ryou is having two babies...that would be great. Oyasumi Nasai!
schedule April 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: * sobs * Poor Ryou. Poor Bakura. Waaaahhhh
LD: * sniffs * That is so sad. Steven's lawyer is a little sketchy, but he has a point... so long as he doesn't try to switch all of the blame onto Bakura.
Karen: Oh I just know that that is what he is going to try to do. He must be stopped!
LD: Hmmm, a baby shower... that has great potential... for good Anzu bashing!
Karen: Yes, I think some Anzu bashing and some good Rod jokes could help this tragically depressing story ^_~
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule April 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn that asshole who calls himself a father!! Is Ryou going to be okay? And please tell me Yami's not planning the baby shower? Oh gods! Something out of Cosmo, I'm sure!
person Shelia
schedule April 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh, you are a goddess! media miner's acting cranky and all, i fly fly found this to read!
person Danae2120
schedule April 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ryou's dream was cute, but Bakura's was so sad...*sniff* Please update soon!
person Michael
schedule April 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! It was a wonderful dream I see from Ryou. So pure love and memory. ^-^ He was acting so cute and funny with his mom. :) And I know WHY that EVIL fail prode the Ryou's dream. His mom is protecting him. She is STILL around him, protecting the child that she make and love. :D No mortal or immortal Shall destory Mother love protect. So Take THAT foo! And also I bet our Ra is protect Ryou as well. Ra is the greatest Ra I ever bow before. :) But I still feel sad and despression of Bakura. He get a flashback of his fear of losing his love one and I bet on the line, he going to feel the same again. Ra no, I hope not. I hate to see Bakura fear for it. Bakura should stand up and fight fear. Fear is NOTHING. Fear CAN be overcome. You have nothing to fear, BUT to fear ITSELF! *stomp my foot on the ground to create earthquake a little* He can do it. I have faith in him. :D With Ryou, Malik, and Marik on his side, he do ido it! ^-^ Have a good creation story my Ra. *bow* Have a great of luck of love and hope for these love. :) Ciao now!