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for Baby of Mine

by Aten

person Bakura and Malik\'s angel
schedule April 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a very cool story please continue soon.
person Michael
schedule April 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Ra. A child have a soul to carry out. Doe this mean it could be a life threating to the family and themself? I hope there a way it cause destory the soul within as bring back what belong to Ryou, Bakura, and Marik making. The Soul is a danger life to put on. Even when that child born, could it mean the Conteii wishes could carry out and murder again once again. But if there is a way it can stop the killing and destory the soul, what happen to the soul they have themself before those demon mind enter. I pray for all Ra power for more blessing over this child. But... My option. I see a flaw for this planning. A Dark alway have ONE weakness. Just like Yami Vs. String.. A Major powerful montser alway have a major weakness. So if this Darkness so Dark as it prey over child dream, it have a weakness over a Light so Light as it gave the power of love and care. :) But that my found of idea of a plan. Who know what COULD happen? I can't wait for this creation that Ra gaving to us. :) This going to be a Angst Story that no one have ever done. :D Ra is the best Angst I ever seen. Keep it up and good luck!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule April 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GODS! Get a clue Bakura and Marik! LOL! This is getting SOOO good!!
person AngelicMouseGirl
schedule April 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*shudder* I've seen the birthing video like you talked about in here... I remember that horrifying experience. It's a scary thing...all the girls in my class at school walked out at the end saying they were never going to have babies. ^-^;; Oh, well...interesting chappy this was and I hope to read more very very soon! ^_^ Arigato! Keep up the teriffic work! ^_^ Oyasumi Nasai!
person Michael
schedule April 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh god!! I felt so sorry for Bakura watching that video. It sure make his skin crawel so bad. lol And I KNEW Malik learn someplace to learn sex there. Let make sure Malik don't have to take... Sex Ed. I bet he will get a A+++! lol Heck, I got an A+ In my sex Ed. SERIOUS! lol It is sound wrong, but true. :P Anyway, I hope Bakura learn alot today about Mother Life. ^-^ Ya know what pityful? Anzu is still in school and doing the health class. I am expecting her to be in Disabitily behave class. Ya know. People who have problem and Anzu fit just PERFECT. lol :P You know, I am wonder if Yami ever find the way to keep Anzu in bay. Any WAY to get her back off the whole thing. HECK! We can get the Chant spell and we can get her do alot crazy or sane thing to do. :) Keep it up my Ra. *bow* Have good luck with the creation. :D
person Michael
schedule April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh GEE. I can't believe Joey is a such a horny puppy. lol It is funny when Yami said, "Gave a puppy a bone." lol That is funny. :P Also I can't believe Yami is STILL bei pri prick for Marik. I thought he would still be asshole for Bakura as well. o.O But you know what scare me? Yami is hurguy and decdie to eat where Marik's work. Oh lord. I know all hell will break loose apart. lol And I bet Marik would wish he bring his Rod with him that day to control Yami. lol Man.. It a ugly picture.... UGLY. lol It going to be fun for the baby shower! ^-^ I can't wait for the baby shower and what up with these guy? These guy don't know what a baby shower and know how to set-it up? I pity them all. But ya know what sweet? Kabia gaving money away and I love the joke he commit. "Heck, I make that much money in my SLEEP!" And you know what is sad? I believe it. lol He DOE make ton of money. Boy.... A guy like him is a better earn than BILL GATE. Speaking of Bill Gate, can anyone find a spell I can used to kill Bill?

Marik: I got my Rod! I can control his money earn and I don't have to work no more! LMAO!!!
Quad: Nah. You stay and keep up the working. ^-^ Mr. Happy Pickie! lol It fit you perfect!
Marik: .... I will make sure you fell asleep and I will KILL YOU!!!!
Malik: Oh chill up.. Mr. Happy Pickie. lol
Quad: At least someone agree.
Marik: Grr... I will curse your life Quad! Mark my word and...
Quad: Shut up. I wanna double Cheeseburger with large Soda.
Marik: ................ *mumble* That be 3.15

Anyway, back what I am saiding. Also great job on the last chapter. It was a bad exp. I hate to see the whole history what happen to our sweet Bakura and the Evil side of Bakura. I felt bad for Ryou. I understand it is painfully to listen. Who want to know the whole bad life again in history. It gotta to be harsh and hard. I can't believe Steven SOMEHOW got that tape. Grr!!! I wish I have my video cambra to tape everything what done between Steven and Ryou and Ryou being attack and then bring it to court, but I am just a reader. Damn it. I hope he BETTER be in jail or I will come after him with the thousand knife all over him. No motral like him shall need to live. Grr. Anyway, Great luck of writing of the Creation of your story my Ra. *bow* It is GREAT! In In fact I love it. Esp that Review joke ya left. Ya know about the Purishment it be make Bakura to become Anzu's Boyfriend. THAT is worse in hell. lol In fact, he will kill himself the moment he get the chance. lol Anyway, I bid you a greater luck on the creation and your life. ^-^
person hotaruchan27
schedule April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I can't get mediaminer to cooperate with me (for the 3rd day in a row) so I'll do this here.

Tigerlily: Lucky for you she updates both.

Yuppers! As usual we love it. Poor Bakura, having to relive his past. I hate Steven. I so wanted to strangle him when Bakura was introducing Ryou. That 'twas funny but sad. Seto is soooo generous. Looks like they won't have to worry about money now.

Tigerlily: Marik should be thrilled.

Marik: Yes!! No more Mr. Happy Pickle for me!!

Malik: Awww, but I thought you liked it when your pickle was happy. And there's something about a man in uniform. *snicker*

Yeah, but will they take it? It was easy with the money he got for the heart operation because it was anonymous and it was life or death. Hhhmmmm, I wonder. I love Seto and Jou's reactions to the news. When is Ryou is going to get his ultrasound? I can't wait until they find out that Ryou's carrying both their babies. Bakura seems really down in the dumps. It'll really cheer him up.
schedule April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Yuck. All of those health videos are nasty.
LD: Especially the ones were the stick the tiny video camera up...
Karen: Oooookaaaayyy, lets stop that train of thought right there.
LD: * shrugs * Whatever. Hehehe, Malik learning about erogenous zones... practicing... practicing on Marik... oh my...
Karen: Hunh, she didn't even notice the Anzu bashing... oh well. Maybe the guys could stuff Anzu in her locker for a couple of days, then she could see how truly friendly locker are * grins evilly * And DAMN, Ryou is already into the second trimester, (S)he hasn't even been pregant for a week! This is gonna turn bad soon, I can feel it.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Bakura! *snicker* Serves you right boy, for that comment you made at the begining of the last chapter! Marik's sooo funny! and Malik's too cute! This is great!!
person Danae2120
schedule April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww.....poor Bakura. Couldn't take a birthing movie, hm? Well, can't wait 'til your next chapter. Reading this story is always the highlight of my day!