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for Baby of Mine

by Aten

person Danae2120
schedule April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh...Ryou's not in labor already, is she? Well, you did say that the next chapter is called "False Alarm" but...ah well. Whatever the chapter is about, it ought to be interesting.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Now that was SWEET!! and so true...best way in the world to put a baby to sleep!!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule April 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Malik! *sniffs* Where my tissue Ra damn it! Poor Ryou...with the babies kicking him...well, they'll put them to sleep in the next chappie with all that rocking! LOL!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH NO!! Is Marik going to be okay? So now Yugi's in trouble too...crap!
person Michael
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not EVEN the Son of God?! The Winged of Ra?! Grr.. This is bad. There got to be a weakness against Yami's Step-brother. No immortal is safe against anyone. They all can be kill by some power, chant, or brutal Strength. I pray for Ra that there have to be a way to ban Yami's Step-Brother to worse of hell. He shall not be no way to be able have power or chant to produce for himself. As for Ryou, I hope you a good luck on the your children you are a-making. :) Esp your boy andl. :l. :) This story going to be a very angst interseting one. Hee Hee. Good luck my Ra.
person The Mystical Dragon
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my god... i hope they are okay...but (winces as she imitates Anzu "TWINS!! YIPPIEEE")
person Danae2120
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO-gasp-OOOOOOOO! God, I want to kill Anubis. I hope Marik will be okay. And I hope that Ryou gives birth soon. But Anubis can die. Die die die. But anyway! Nice chapter and keep updating!
person AngelicMouseGirl
schedule April 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I think I'm starting to figure somethings out about this...I won't tell though. I might not be right. Soooo Updates are always wanted and you are such a great person to bring this to me everyday!! Arigato! Oyasumi Nasai! ^_^
person TheMysticalDragon
schedule April 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
KAWAII!! But in all seriousness... uh oh. this cant be good! and for Bakura in the health class... she wont remember what she said the moment she has the baby.... so if ryou screams at you during labor, take it with a grain of salt
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule April 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
EEEPPP!! Poor Bakura! This is getting really twisted...I love it!! Too bad Bakura & Marik aren't going to be at the ultrasound. I can't wait to see Malik's reaction!