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for Baby of Mine

by Aten

person AngelicMouseGirl
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey cool! I knew that song should eventually be in this fic somewhere. ^_^ Everytime I see this it always popped in my head. This is getting really good and kinda scary and sad too. But still awesome fic! ^_^ Yes! Keep up the fantastic work! Ja ne! ^_^
person Tiamat
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey I was wondering, you know that my gift for the babies was a little mini look alike millinum rod. Well before they babys get it
can it hit Anubis on the head a couple dozen times? Please hehe I really want to strangle the jerk but since I cant the rod will have
to do :P I love the way the story is going! And since Media was not working I have to resort to adultfanfiction.net to get to your story,
I am very very happy that you have this posted on this site as well!
person gralnak
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!
as allways keep up the good work!
:)GRALNAK
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Who's watching them? WHO?!?!?
Seto...hahahaha!! Poor Joey, no treats for him tonight! *snicker*
person gralnak
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for next chapter!
WEEEE!!!!
BABIES!!!!
EVIL BABIES!!!
WOOHOO!!
:)GRALNAK
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
eeeppp!!! ATE!ATE!!!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Seto...black lace...BWAHAHAHA!! *falls over laughing* MEDIC!!
person Michael
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
o.o Remind me to not GO to any baby shower anymore. I am not going to get involved with the women clothes thing. >.<

Marik and Seto and Yami: Chicken!!!
Quad: Don't make me duel you both. I got the skill of Kabia... Duel of a Panix... and strong believe in the heart of the card like Yami.
Marik: ....... You know, women clothes doen't fit you. Right Kabia? '
Kabia: Yea! I agree! It look just NOT good on him. What about you Yami?
Yami: I am still calling him a Ckicken!
Quad: ... I wish you were alive so I can claim myself an number ONE duelist and soon, I will make Kabia, Marik, and Peagues look like a JOKE! *smirk*
Yami: WE SEE!

Anyway, I like the baby shower you got there Ra. I thought ya going to put something to annoy Marik alot? It going to be a blast and funny. ^-^ But ya choice and I respect that. So Keep it up, I hope the creation of your going to be a blast! :D
person gralnak
schedule April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!
my computer was giving problems with mm.org and still is, so I came here to review!
can't wait for the baby shower!
HEEHEE!!!
:)GRALNAK
person Michael
schedule April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Ra... Malik FALL asleep on Ryou while she got him going... That is so pityful. lol I can understand how STRONG Ryou's sentive and soft she is. That the beauty of woman. It good for children. It can rest so comfurable on the mother. :) Think about it folk. I know alot guy who would like that kind of body, but remember. It kind of make the baby feel secure and restful on the mother. ^-^ Other thing, Marik. I hope you get better. We need you back. I hope not going to affect him for the job. Get well Marik. Keep it up Ra. You doing GREAT on this Creation. I am gaving a THUMB up!! BOTH OF IT! You are great. Anyone like my review also as well you writer, go ahead email me. I don't mind to tell you how this story is important and great toward me. :) Or we can have some other chat. :) Like the wise man once said, "There ALWAY room for one more friend. " I love you all. Keep up the review for this writer. I wanna everyone to agree with me that this story is the BEST!!! :D Ciao for tonight. :)