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for Baby of Mine

by Aten

person lupusdragon
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: R
person Lupusdragon (again)
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: Ok, lets try this again
Karen: Baby of Mine review take two
LD: RA DAMN ANUBIS! I am gonna kill him!
Karen: Aten is so cute. I feel so bad for him though, because he is smaller and weaker and less than a day old and is already receiving the brunt of Millennium Rod jokes.
LD: Yeah, that is just wrong ( but really funny )
Karen: And Aria, I guess both kids are like their fathers, after all of the Millennium Items. I am sure it will be fun once they are a little older * snickers *
LD: ^__^ Two more crazy yami types!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: Were you up all night?
YD: Sweet Isis girl!
DD: That was great! The next chapter should be good.
YD: Yeah! *snicker* Aunt Yami! Hehehe
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: Well, that was fast...
Karen: What did you expect? Besides, the babies are alive, Ryou is alive... hehe Do not underestimate the powers of modern medicine Anubis! Muahhahaha
LD: O.o Ok, it is official, you are on crack
Karen: Humph, no I am not. I just love when evil is foiled!
LD: Aten and Aria... good names for twins, they sound good together.
Karen: Yippie! 'nuther good chappie! More, more more!
person Shelia
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ohhh poor ryou... i know everyone will be okay though... they just have to be!
person Michael
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh RA!! I never know Seto have a soft spot for a babie. lmao This I gotta see!! Hee Hee! Also BTW, I am glad Marik quit his job. It is worse I ever see. Don't worry, I have faith in you that you can find a job. Go same for Bakura, but however I starting to feel Ryou is subject a way to destory Yami's Stepbro's plan. ;) I hope there more on the way to destory on it way. :) I have doubt that The soul within will fail, but will become light. ;) Who know?

Quad: Hey Marik... It a beautiful name for your son. *pat his back* Remember now, you got a son who have strong fighter like you. :)
Marik: Thank you. I am glad he alive.
Quad: When you have faith from everyone in the world and your friend, it will survice. Faith is powerful thing in the world.
Yami: I told you Kabia that heart of the card is more like Faith.
Quad: Shut up Yami. I can kick ya ass with my eye close. ^-^
Yami: Bring it on!
person gralnak
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good chapter!
Can't wait to finish reviewing this so I can read next chapter!
YEAH! HAPPY PICKLES ARE LIKE FRIENDSHIP!
I have a question, email me the answer if you could is it just me or is there something wrong with media miner?
:)gralnak
person Danae2120
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! The babies have been born! *squeals*

Ooh, Seto? Having a soft spot? For babies, nonetheless?! That's insanity. But sounds fun.
person Liz
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
EWWWWW! they were actually WATCHING Ryou do it with Bakura and Marik! what hentais! ok, as ya know, i couldn't go to MediaMiner for a reaaaaaallllly long time, but i didn't wanna tell anyone. i'll try my best to catch up, but now, i'm like, 23 chapters behind and i just finished chappie 13ybe ybe if i read 2 or 3 chapters per day, i'll catch up...eventually. what really scares me is that we're learning about how to do it at school. I DIDN'T MEAN IT THAT WAY! WE'RE JUST WATCHING MOVIES!!!!!!! *blushes until the house catches fire* wow, i really did give Nodjmetperspersonality. anyway, time to read some more!
person AngelicMouseGirl
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Marik talk about a breakdown. Sheesh, this isn't a happy sitution right now is it? bad.bad. I hope it gets better in the future for everyone in here. This fic is so shibby! Awesomeness ensues! Yeah! I can't wait for the babies to be born! Kawaii! UPDATE when you do soon! You rock! ^_^ Ja ne!