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what will happen next?

Aw...that was such a sweet lemon...I loved it. Please write more!

I know Bakura have done alot bad thing in life. Heck, I hate him what he done to Yugi friend as he trying to steal the Puzzle and all, but he change. I know deep inside, everyone CAN change and I am glad Bakura get a second chance in life. Don't feel useless Bakura. Ryou may should you in the past how he suffer the pain and all, but if he didn't love you, he would kill himself before you can get get to it. But he didn't did he? :) He love you and he will ALWAY love you no matter who you are. :) You are part of him as just as well he part of you. :) I am glad you two are together. It make me cry when you two are apart. Esp when STEVEN..rr..rr.... Took your Ring and toss it out in the wood, but... *shrug* The moron girl.... *shudder*Anzu lucky find it as she went to see Ryou's friend for some FRIENDSHIP shit as lucky it got it back. Much I hate her Ryou, but you HAVE To submit this to me. If wasn't for her, you wouldn't got your great love one back. :) I know. I refuse to accpet it, but I have to. I am glad there people on your side Ryou. there Edivce and all. You will able to put ya father in jail or BETTER FOR ME!! DEATH ROW!! I be happy to THROW a switch.. It be the GREATEST honor of all time... Just to pull a switch on that... Homophoica!! Grr. And please don't said he all you got. You got a family now.. You got Marik, Malik, The son of Aten and Daughtler of Aria, and most important of them all... The Sweet Yami Bakura. :) The Yami Angel... BTW, I love the website in MSN... I learn alot... :) Yami mean Darkness and Yuugi mean game... Neke mean stupid. That be for Anzu. lol Anyway, keep it up Ra. You doing GREAT job! ^-^

A pair of 5,000 year old guy who just got a son and Dauglter. It scare me that Malik and Ryou know more than them. My god they are scaring me. I start to wonder if Marik and Bakura are going insane of the kid cry and don't know what to solve the problem. lol I am glad Malik feel Natural of the son. :) He is more like a mother and it is simple to figure the problem, but it can be hard to understand it can cry is a sign of want to talk. :)

Marik and Bakura: Why don't we just put a Mill. eye on and we can read the baby thought?
Quad: You two are just easy mind. Wouldn't that be challenge for your parenting ya son and daughtler?
Marik: At least it can save up the trouble.
Bakura: And headache. ^-^
Quad: ...... Lazy. Just plain Lazy.
Marik and Bakura: IT NOT! It.... umm.mplemple umm.. Chat! ^-^
Quad: Rrrrrrright and I am Married to Ra.
Marik and Bakura: YOU ARE?!!! *bow before Quad*
Quad fell down as get up with the lump on the head: I am not!! Gee.

Anyway, The age are growing up pretty fast, don't ya think. I wonder how this could get the ages to grow quicker without harming themself. It need to proder grow or else, it can go outta control. I hope they be fine. Good luck with the trial Ryou and Bakura. You going to need it. *thumb up* Keep it up my ra. *bow* You are doing great creation. ^-^

Karen: Awwww! Too sweet!
LD: hehe, those babies are so cute. I still can't get over Seto with the babies. I hope Aria will be a good big sister.
Karen: She laughed when Ryou started to cry. You can tell she is the dark one. I though no one would help but feel sympathetic when Ryou cries. * sigh * such pretty eyes * drools *
LD:a, Ra, Ryou is a girl right now and you drooling.
Karen: So, she is not always a girl and either way those eyes are to die for.
LD: And Malik and Marik go at it again. You call ME insatiable.
Karen: No wonder you like them so much!

mmmmm....lemon

oooooo....Seto....and his doctor, this should be interesting......heehee!!!
:)

YD: HEHEHE!! Poor Bakura!
DD: *snicker*

LD: Damn! Ryou is a little tease!
Karen: Hehe. This was a really good chapter! I love that Malik is like another mommy.
LD: Hmmm, I guess he would be. He has that mother's intuition thing going... it is kinda scary.
Karen: I think it is sweet. I mean, Ryou can't do it all alone and the Yamis are practically clueless.
LD: And tomorrow is more of the trial. I hope that goes well. That evil lawyer is going to try to blame everything on Bakura, I just know it!
Karen: Well of course he is, that is his job. I just hope the judge and jury don't buy it.
LD: I doubt it. Bakura is a VERY good actor! ^____^

I know how this sort of feels having a little brother myself.
This bring back memories, sort of..ll..ll....my life wasn't filled with evil spirits....and....stuff...yeah you know.....
LOVE & PEACE
:)GRALNAK