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by Aten

person The Mystical Dragon
schedule May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:grabs a box of kleenax and hands out hankies, taking one for herself: ohhh my :huggles Malik, Ryou and the chibis: it's okay sweethearts.

Dear lord, that sounds scary.... but good work! :hugs Bakurasgirl:
person Michael
schedule May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*laughing out loud* Oh dear Ra!! Marik new job is EVEN WORSE!!! Oh Ra... You are so mean to Marik... I gotta see him at work. I can't imagine in my head what he look like and what happen at work. lol It got to be 4 time WORSE than Mr. Happy Pickle. :P Hee Hee. And same for Bakura everyone. What an idea for buying a Dark Magican for Aria to play and chew on. Hee Hee. And that will make Auntie's temper go THOUGH the roof. Bakura is doing a GOOD job making the Yami piss off. lol As I agree with the logical. "You may kill us before Yami, but ya can't kill us twice." lol Poor Yami. I wish I could do something for my favorite person. Yami/Yugi. At least Yugi don't care cause he is Yugi. The most sweet guy for me. ^-^ He kewl and handsome. ;)

Ryou as a Man: What about me?
Malik: And me?
Joey: Me too?
Kabia: I thought I was your favorite.
Quad: Ryou, you are shy little guy when I learn from you. Malik, you are gentle as a kitty, but too much on Rod. Joey, go find yourself a bone cause you whine too much. And Kabia, you are my favorite... To play with. You are the most powerful guy I ever met. :)
Yami: HA!! Sure.. And he get his ass whop by me!
Quad: Not with me. ^-^
Yami: Bring it on.
Quad: ..... Maybe later Auntie. *run away*
Yami: GRRR!!!! GET YA BUTT BACK HERE!!! *chasing after Quad*

*Panting as I run* So, keep it up Ra. You doing great. It getting more love and funny with the creation ya making. :) I am proud of Aria first word. Daddy. :) It so cute. Keep it up. Who know it can call him Auntie? *point behind me* Yami: I will get you and when I do, I will summon Dark Magican to harm you SLOWLY! Quad: I hope I get to hear from you more. ;) Ciao! *panting hard as disappear*
person Tiamat
schedule May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*falls over in giggles* Oh I loved that scene whee bae babies are hitting Anubis hehe. I knew my persent would come in handy hehe.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Hehehe...Aunt Yami!
DD: That was too cute!
YD: You know...it's funny that Anubis only comes around when Bakura and Marik aren't there.
DD: True...maybe he's afraid of them? Interesting...
YD: Enjoy your vacation girl!
DD: Yeah! You deserve it!
person gralnak
schedule May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good job with the chap
At
Aten rocks!
YEAH ATEN!
:)GRALNAK
person hato_chiisai
schedule May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I absolutely love it! Aten is SO ADORABLE!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next cjhapter, and it's so cute how he calls Malik Mama! *Squeals, and glomps Aten* As for Aria, it's kinda creepy, but I found one of my fic ideas from a while ago, wich was basically the idea of Ryou turning into a girl and having a baby, (I told you about it when you were still working on the Fall of Icarus, remember?) Well, here's the creepy thing....... I was gonna make Ryou have a son, and name it Aryah. o_O yah.... wierd. But I love what you've done with all this. Hope to IM you soon, you haven't been on much lately! Anyway, keep going! The fic's great!!!!! ^_^
person ssjgoddesschico
schedule May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! The scenes wehre they tried to say everyones names was so cute ^_^
person Michael
schedule May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Grr... Curse him. Every time the Yami leave, he show up. And I have feeling love is beginning to overcome, but it still not enough I know. It take more than love. It take knowedlge the love. :) Aten is going to be fine. He going to be strong like Ryou. He have a gentic that going keep on fighting for living. Aria, well.. For min I THOUGHT she was doing to harm Ryou, but I agree with Ryou AND Bakura. She is hurguy and she is a bloodlust. :P I can't blame her cause it in her Gene. :) I am so happy for those two kid. ^-^ *giggle* Keep it up Kid. Yes.. Yami is Auntie. He Auntie Yami.

Yami showing vien on it forehead: Mortal. You need to stop that.
Quad: What? It true. Beside, you look and sound good with a name Auntie. ^-^
Yami: Grrr... I thought ya have crush on my little Yugi and me.
Quad: I do. ^-^ That doen't mean I am on your side. lol Are you trying to gather people to be on ya side?
Yami: NO NO! What ever you talking about? o.o
Quad: Bakura and Marik... PLEASE keep it ith ith the Auntie. You are doing good job.
Yami: DAMN IT! I am not auntie.
Quad slap Yami: Hey... There kid here. Keep the cuss down.
Yami: ....

Anyway, Keep it upRa. Ra. ^-^ You doing great. The kid is growing up as so CUTE and that little boy Aten is so awsome with his Toy Rod hitting on his father. It so funny. I wonder what happen if that boy get hold of his Father's Rod. Who know what power that kid can unleashed. lmao I bet it be funny and cute, but danger. lol So... Keep it up. Take ya time with ya vaction. COME ONE everyone don't rush it. She need break. Everyone got break. She got a life ya know. Let have a big break and I am postive is she get more break, the better idea and better story she can come up with. ;) Trust me people. I know it. She can able pull off the BEST chapter of your LIFE!!! I know she can. I have faith in her. ;) Good luck. And Ra bless.
person Tiamat
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*hides head and peaks around and pops back up again when she notices the het is over with* hehe kind of funny considering I am
het but yet I cant stand reading about it hehe. Anyway love the chapter! Hehe I just noticed a gift that nobody gave the babies! Hehe
Anzu being banished to the Shadow Realm for all enternity! hehe to bad though hehe to bad I didnt think of that before I thought of the
Millinum toy rod, hehe oh well I like my rod.........*Goes into Marik Pervert mode for a moment* hehe gotta be careful what I say after
reading chapters about Marik and his Rod jokes!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: What is it with the two of them and bathtubs?
DD: mmm....suds...