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for Baby of Mine

by Aten

person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: HOLY CRAP!! That was so HOT!!
YD: Umm-hmm!
DD: I can't believe this story's almost over!
YD: Yeah, but there's gonna be a sequel.
DD: Ooohhh...love sequels!
YD: Well, the first thing that better happen is Seto making it up to those kids for being such an ass!
DD: Agreed!
person The Mystical Dragon
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful lemon... wow...
person Ryou\'sMistess265
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww! That was so cute! When you said that Marik never prepared Malik, does that mean that marik wasn't malik's first cause that would kinda sorta hurt a vigin.
person Bluesummers
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
To make the last chapter special in my own way, Im going to review once more as Gralnak,
I enjoy this chapter quite a lot, and can not wait to see what the next part of this wonderful story arch will hold.
:)BLUESUMMERS
person lupusdragon
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: That was the most evil epilogue I have ever read.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: *glomps Bakurasgirl* That was great!
DD: *shoves YD over and glomps Bakurasgirl* You rock doll!
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How's he gonna have sex? Malik's half-dead.
person lupusdragon
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen; You know, sometimes it is just nice to hear someone say "I love you", even if you already know that they do.
LD: Stop being so sentimental all the time.
Karen: I can't help it. Besides, something has to balance you and your lack of sensitvity.
LD: I am not insesitive. I liked this chapter very much. I love to see my two bishies together.
Karen: Ok, fine, you are not cold-hearted.
LD: Mmm, the lemony goodness. This chapter was really *grimaces * sweet. I didn't want to say it, but there really is no other discription so appropriate.
Karen: *glomps LD * Thank you for saying that. I completely agree!
person Michael
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry for no review from me. When come to the chap. where the kid is going to kill Malik and Ryou, I just drop. Cry, anger, and scream for mercy. It was Unbearabley for me to keep reading it. Till the end.... Oh Ra... How do I love Marik action. That my friend.... It a true love. A man willing just to go EXTREME MEASURE!! Oh Ra, you got it comming Step-bro. You got youself into where ya should have leave Marik and Bakura's lover and themself. Otherwise, you going to pay the Rapier. And no one want to do that. Anyway, Ryou's mother is back. :) I was just cry for her. She was a great mom. I understand she couldn't protect Ryou's Children, but that is ok. Ryou's love is MORE powerful. ^-^ Go Ryou. I love him. He is so great. :D I envy Bakura so much. He got Ryou and he will alway get him. But I am wonder. Is there way we can get Bakura become Mortal?
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet!! I never knew Marik could be like that! I am just so happy everyone is back together again! I also can't believe this fic is almost over. I know there is a sequel, but I just love this one! I can't wait for the sequel to come out!