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by Aten

person Michael
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That... Dream... almost got me grab a nearly tough item to make the computer break into piece till I realize it a test as it gave me a HEART ATTACK. I was about to kill Bakura, Marik, Kabia, and Joey SOOOOO BADLY as they wish they never been BORN. But I am so grab it just a test. It just scare the hell outta me. Warn me next time. Would ya? lol It one freak out story. I like to said... YAY!!!!! I am so glad Ryou is back as one of us. ^-^ I was wonder if he ever come back toa maa man. I love him as a man. I don't mind a woman, but he was born as a man and I love him as a man. He so cute as one. ^-^ I can't WAIT for Bakura to mate with Ryou. No. Just a pair. Just Ryou and Bakura. This must be only for fully Bakura.. make it inteanse love yaoi between Ryou and Bakura.. make it like Ryou AND Bakura slip on ice and cannot get up. lol ^-^ I would be so happy. Maybe Ryou will get chance back with Malik and Marik, I think maybe next it be Marik... Marik is suffer the whole.... Busy bea lol lol ^-^ He need it, but not next chapter. Maybe AFTER Next Next chapter. Please. I am sure it be GREAT on Angst. ;) And then Malik and then... WHOLE EVERYONE. ;) lmao So.. Keep it up. And... Try to make the freak out less. lol Your creation, and I can't stop you. But I just like to ask. :) So, keep it up. You doing great job. Don't ever lose this interset. This is going to be one heck of the book. If only you can allow to make a book outta of it. :) I love ya all and BTW, Happy mother day Ra. *hugz ya tight* Keep in touch. As for Ryou, he once a woman and I wanna said this to him... Happy mother day to you. *hugz Ryou* You will make a great mom. I believe in you.. in my heart. *touch myself on the chest* Keep it real.
person Kaede
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Ryou's a Guy again!! YEAHH!!!!!!!
person Tiamat
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I kind of hope you do a Bakura/Ryou one first :P Then later do a foursome hehe But I think that Bakura should enjoy the change first.......After all he has to make sure everything is in working order hehe.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Ryou x Bakura
DD: Malik x Ryou
YD: What?! No way!
DD: Yes way!
YD: No!
DD: Yes!
*fight breaks out*
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ryou's back to normal! Yay! I want foursome chappie! Haven't had one of those for awhile. The whole fire thing was creepy. Hehe, the lemony goodness is a good idea. ^_^
person gralnak
schedule May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN!
YamiGralnak:HOT DAMN!

NOW THINGS ARE BACK THE WAY I LIKE IT! WOOHOO!!!
YEAH! RYOU'S A BOY AGAIN! I DON'T CARE WHO IS IN THE LEMON, EVERYTHING
IS FINE WITH ME!!!!
heehee, I liked the little Seto X Joey part of the dream......mmmm
:)GRALNAK, you friendly reviewer who has been waiting day after day for this chapter to come.
Im so happy I could practectly jump right into the story, and dance around singing "RYOU IS A BOY AGAIN, BOY AGAIN" over and over again.......
person lupusdragon
schedule May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: Give us the YAOI!
Karen: You really did set that up for a little lemony goodness...
LD: I vote foursome!
Karen: Of course you do.
LD: Well what do you want?
Karen: I don't really care... I mean it is not important. I definitely want a lemon, however.
LD: Yay for yaoi lemons
Karen: And Ryou is going to have to risk his (Yay, he is a boy again!) life to save the babies. With no one to help him... poor Ryou.
LD: He can do it. Ryou is stronger than he looks. He survived Evil Bakura afterall.
Karen: Yeah, if he can do that, he can do anything!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Busy Beaver! BWAHAHAHA!
DD: Poor Marik..hehehe
YD: When are they going to go after Anubis?
DD: They need to kick some butt!!
person gralnak
schedule May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aten, makes me feel fuzzy inside......yeah........heehee......
I really hope that he does not become evil....sooooo fuzzy.....yeah...
:)GRALNAK
person Danae2120
schedule May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aw! T'is soo kawaii! Aten and Aria are just adorable. Anubis better keep his grimy claws off of the babies or he'll face MY wrath.

Poor Marik. First it's Mr. Happy Fun Pickle or whatever, now it's Busy Beaver. How much worse can it get?