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by Aten

person AngelicMouseGirl
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god PLEASE DON'T KILL YUUGI!!! AAAAhhhhh!!! UPDATE! Auntie Yami is funny though...^^; Just so you know. LOVE THIS FIC! MORE! Ja ne!
person Tiamat
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ewwww so it was like Anubis was the one that slept with Ryou, err somehow I dont think Ryou is going to like that fact when he finds out! Hehe Yotorytory is getting super super good, I cant wait till the next chapter!
person star fire
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey great storie On queton thught ar you ging o gie seto a memeryof eng high preist thtat ouldbe col if you did not a lot of authors dbu i wish tey wuld . see
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: OMG!! Malik's so in for it!
YD: Poor Malik!
DD: Man Seto's so cool in a crisis.
YD: Mmmm...Setopop
DD: *hits her yami* Hush! Gods woman!
person Danae2120
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Weeeeeeeell...it'd be cool if Yugi got killed...yeah. I think I rather have Yugi get killed. Then there'd be some angst in the story, and angst rocks socks. But, do what you want. It's your story. *shrugs*
person gralnak
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aten is sooooooooooooooooooo cute with the toy monkey, you should ask cheesepuff to make a drawing of Aten hugging the toy monkey.........that would be soooooooooooooooooo cute..........
:)GRALNAK
person Michael
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O.O!!! Hurry save Yugi, Yami! Save him... I don't wanna see him kill.. I beg for Bakura thought to be change and be as calm and gentle he was. I ask for power for love and light to stop his doing. It must be a way to stop it. Hurry Yami. Before your perious Yugi die. If Yugi die, so shall I(Not in real life. Just Quad). As for other part I love the kid now... They said it PERFECT for Auntie. ^-^ what a cute kids I love. Poor Yami. I know those kid are raising proper way of learning. So deal with it honey. lol As for Joey. Come on. Almost EVERYONE call you a puppy. I bet Kabia a wit with me. lol Beside, you look cute as a puppy.

Joey: AM NOT!! GRR!! *trying to grab a hold of Quad as Kabia got him in the leash*
Quad: You are too. Ya just Growl at me. lol
Joey: That anger growl. Not a dog way.
Quad: Kabia?
Kabia: Silent dog. Sit and whine.
Joey sweatdrop appear behind it head as he sat down and whine.
Quad: I prove my point. ^-^

So.. keep it up. And Hurry Yami. It time running out. I wish you to make it. I hope. No. I don't hope. Hope it nothing. I KNOW ya make it. It your love. You and him are in one and will be in one forever.... Keep it up Ra. You doing good. This getting more powerful I ever imgaine. :)
person lupusdragon
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: No, no sacrificing Yugi!
LD: Aww, come on, just a little?
Karen: NO! * sob * poor Bakura. Bad Anubis!
LD: Um, you can't scold him like the Puppy. It doesn't work that way. hehehe Auntie Yami and Unkie Puppy! hehehehehehehehehehe
Karen: Yeah, that was good. But they just have to save Bakura and Yugi!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: THAT'S IT! You are SO dead!!!
DD; Calm down yami. You know shl upl update tomorrow.
YD: She'd better! If she doesn't...
DD; Liked that comment about Seto and Yugi going into business together...*wink*
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! That is all : )