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Just when i begin to think she's gone you bring her back for another round. Do me a favor... Don't let her near Malik. *Yugi eyes*

O_O No! Not Anzu! I thought you killed her off or something. Oh well. The gang going to the petting zoo should be amusing.

YD: *incoherent with laughter*
DD: That was SOO funny!
YD: Joey...and t-the goat...Aten! HEHEHEHE!
DD: I thought it was cute when the kids fell asleep on Joey and Seto...they need kids!
YD: Hmm...vote...innocent
DD: *smacks her yami* guilty

I vote the second one :P Sorry but I think Ryou and Bakura have been through to much to have to go through being forced to seperate again. And besides that would really torment the children. Perhaps instead you can write about him escaping from Prison and going after Ryou and/or Bakura, He could be going after Ba toa to get back at him for "perverting his son" and he could be going after Ryou for sending him to jail!

That was disturbingly amusing. I LOVE the chappies with Anzu (especially when Aria bit her). Keep going! Ganbatte! oh and i think Steven should be soo guilty.

I vote guilty for Steven

I am back from my vaction. ^-^ I miss Three Creation, my Ra. So far, it getting more interseting and more danger laid ahead. I vote for.... HIS DEATH ROW!!!! No wait. I got better idea. Life in prison. Along with that he going to meet... BUBBA! Big, hairy, ugly SOB, Bubba. *evil chuckle* Then he TOO will learn the true meaning of .. YAOI! But this time.. he will become a BITCH!!! Hee Hee Hee Hee! HAHAHAHA!! *coughing* Anyway, I hope Everyone vote his in Jail. please. If he go free, I will beg for Yami, Bakura, Marik, AND Seto to MURDER HIM SLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWLY! And so painfully that he will WISH that his family life never been born. Heck, I could do WORSE than all of them together they can do. I will make sure he will get rape every MIN of it till he will learn to love it and then kill him.. bring back him as monster reborn and then try to find another way to kill him and then monster reborn again.. and SO on.. So on... He WILL beg me to kill him once and for all. *smile evilly* Anyway, I am sorry for ya death of the family. If ya like someone to talk to, email me. :) I try to cheer ya up. ;) You are my great friend. I hate to see you get work up on it. So, I hope I get hear from ya soon as for the vote... I choose Jail. Jail Jail Jail. ^-^ Ciao now.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DO NOT I REPEAT DO NOT MAKE THAT ASS HOLE INNOCENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE IS GUILTY! GUILTY I SAY!!!!! please(makes puppy eyes)pleeeeeaaaaassee make steven guilty. its just no right if you don't. you can still make a some what sad sequel BUT with a happy ending hopefully (eyes the aother waraly)

can't breath........still laughing.......need......air....
HOT DAMN!
now that was funny, this chapter and the last, made me laugh so much.
as for steven, he is evil, but you should decide what happens to him.
ok, it official, you better make a Yaoi lemon scene with Aten, when he gets older, or Ill go insae, he is soooooo cute now, just imagine him in a few years *drools*......sorry if Im a sicko some times but I can't help it.
:)GRALNAK
check out ch10 of undying light.....it's very odd.....well you could really like it.......or really hate it......but now I wont have to worry about it.

I just read some of the reviews and i agree with Tiamat Ryou and ra hra have been thourgh so much already. make steven aka asshole guilty.