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Hey it's me again! lol.Thanks I will hit him for you!And bring lots more lemony goodness!XD
BuffyM:*bashes steven with marik's rod knocking him unconcious*
Steven:X_X
Marik:Ok that is the final straw give me my-ahh!!
BuffyM:*put anzu in front of her as a shield*Anzu he needs your hugs your..Friendship!
Marik:O_O no anything but tha-ahh*Anzu hugs him tightly*
Anzu:FRIENDSHIP!!!!
BuffyM:*sneaks away with the rod.**snickers*heh i wonder where Yami's at..oh yami!...omg!!
....to be continued lol i'm glad steven's guilty but there's something to it isn't there?I can tell
BuffyM:*sees steven trying to get up knocks him unconcious again*
Marik in the background being squeezed to death er uh being squeezed lol by anzu
Anzu:FRIENDSHIP!!!!!!
Marik:*turning blue*

*Gives the author a big bear hug and refuses to let go until 10 minutes later* Thank you thank you for not torturing Ryou anymore about his father :) Nothing could be as bad as what Steven has already done to Ryou and I dont think he could have handled being seperated from Bakura again! (hehe isnt it kind of amusing when your fans start talking about the characters like they are real?). Anyway keep up the good work and I cant wait till the babys are back to their true selfs!

*get on my knee as I was shock* Oh Ra.... Oh Ra... This must be the lucky day of my life. The man is now in Prison.... Steven. He is Guitly. The Court find him guilty. He it it all written on his ugly SOB face of his. *chuckle insane* It must be a blessing!!! *jump around as I sing to the world* STEVEN IS IN JAIL! HAHAHAHA!! YES YES YES!! Steven is in prison! This call for! *stand up and raise the beer* BEER! lmao! *Bar person took it away from me* Sorry. You still young... ¬.¬ Damn it. How about... *Stand up and raise the can of pop* SODA!!! *Gas station attendent* You got 5,000 to pay for everyone in this room? ¬.¬ Ok... For last time..... How about... *stand up once again and raise up a cup of water* H2O!!!! :D *Water Fee Collecter* We here to see Mr. Michael Moon. He owe alot money... *fake accent of Japanese* He is no longer here. I heard he move to different town. Want me to point it out where? *Water Fee Collecter* Umm. No... Thank... Sir... We.. Can.. Take... it... From... Here.. Bye... Bye.. *bow their head as took off* Idoit Water people. They known nothing. So once again... *smell the lemon as I breatt* Yt* You right Dragon. The Lemon is near. Hee Hee. I bet this going to be the night we never forget. It the victory of.... STEVEN THE ASSHOLE IN JAIL!!! Hee Hee Hee! *Malik and Ryou slap my face and said together* HEY! There kids here! *Quad* Oh... Sorry. *snrink small size as like a action figure* So, I hope the Lemonness going to be the unforgetable. ;) But then again. Ryou and Bakura Night of lemon is alway unforgetable. lmao. So, keep it up. You are great. Super. ^-^ Ciow.ow.

OH MY RA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and all the other gods. I WUV YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT BASTARD WAS FOUND GUILTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( dose a little happy dance) thank you thank you thank you so much for makeing him guilty. i was so scard when i read this chapther that he would be innocent. i'm looking forwrd to the next chapter

*singing off key* CEEEEEEEEEEEEEELABRATE GOOD TIMES COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It a celebration!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YD: Damn! That was SO hot!!
DD: *fans self* Is it hot in here?
YD: I can't wait for the next chapter!
DD: Oh ye gods! Seto and Joey baby sitting for the night!
YD: *snicker*

OMR! That was amazing!! *fans herself* LMAO!! Aria and Aten are gonna have alot of fun next chappie considering the toys they are gonna find! lol I can't wait!!!

WOW.... holy moly... wheeeeeeeee!!!!!!!

okay.... Goodbye Steven... hope you rot in hell
Malik and Ryou... tee hee... next time maybe you should tie up the yamis and have fun TEE HEE

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.......
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YamiGralnak:*slaps bulesummers*
Bluesummers:ow....anyway, another well done(or was it raw?) lemon.
Heehee.nextnext chapter could be funny, rod jokes...not Marik's rod though........you get the point though...
:)Bluesummers & YamiGralnak

hehe sorry if I messed up your next story idea....Wait a minute I'm not lol I dont want Ryou to go with Steven for all the reasons I listed! I do hope you take a different path instead, Like I said having him escwoulwould be more intersting to read! Anyway That was a sad chapter and the saddest thing is that I can see Steven doing that to Ryou and the babies!