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More!! More!!! Or else I' ll hold my breath > <
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OOPPS!! If you get two reviews from me and one is blank, it's my fault. I hit the enter key instead of the tab key. I think you should deatlyatly continue this. It has a really good start. I like the humor you added in at Tea's expence. I do have a few requests. 1.) Could you seperate your author's note from the rest of the story? 2.) On the next chapter could you make it longer? If you don't have any ideas or just hate typing, then I'll forgive you if keepkeep going and update in every spare minute you get! Good luck. Writing fanfictions and dealing with life are hard things to do together! Trust me, I know! Have fun with this!! That's the whole point.

No matter what anybody says, I'll always be on the Tea-hater side...... (I've got $100.00 for Yami if sends her to the Shadow Realm!) *evil grin*
I'm curious where this story is going, so I give you the thumbs up to go on with it.

Grammars a little rough and it reads a bit bumpy, but otherwise it's okay.
One suggestion though . . . you might want to lay off the Tea bashing just a bit. As much as I dislike Tea, people do get tired of reading too much bashing of characters.
Other than that, I'd be willing to read this.

Gah! You’re ending it there! Just like that? *Friend comes out and hits me on the head* Well duh! Stop stating the obvious (I cant believe she made me write that!) Well any way, I want to learn more about this fic, you have my interest please keep going. *Another hit on the head* Would you stop that! Oh you have my friend’s interest to…