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for Sleep Talker

by MarikIshtar77

person ani
schedule December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
pull those strings baby, pull those strings!!! XDDDDDDDD
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMGosh!! this is awesome!!!!
person Chitoko Kanzaki
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooohsss >w
person Victoria Violet
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::blink, blink:: That rocked. I especially liked the end. Bad Kura for using Ryou like that. I'd love to see the next morning and how they deal with what had happened. Do you think you could do a sequel? I hope so since I love your work. Don't stop writing, and read more doujinshi before bed. Then you can come with other stories like this. LOL Anyways in short, you rock!!! Ja ne
person sarah
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i didnt like the end..that last line, it was...creepy.
But the rest was just great.
*snicker* he was so awake. lol.

person LadyGrey
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww. That was hot, and doing it all with Ryou's internal monologue was interesting. Loved the ending too. I had the thought that 'Kura might actually be awake, but was afraid of scaring Ryou off if he 'woke up'; also, he would have to deal with his feelings and fight not to flip them and pound Ryou into the mattress. Oh, hey, there's a sequal idea. Err, sorry.. I like reading one-shots, but I'm horrible at keeping my thoughts to them. Okay, ja ne, good writing.
person aspiker
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good one shot! 8-) Sounds like what ever Bakura wants he gets... hehe
person Horizont
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That rocks! You really know how to write! ^_^x

Em, gotta learn chemistry, so this is a bit short, never mind! ^^;;
person Nomalaz
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Oh hell, he feels so warm, so tempting.......so.......mine." That line rules. Ryou, Ryou, too horney to realize it was a setup.
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, now... That was pretty awesome! I really liked this whole concept, and you executed it beautifully!