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for The Long Way

by JadeParker

person Queen of Anime
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good. And I don't say that about many stories. E-mail me when you update again.
~Queen of Anime~
person yaoi girl
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know i think that you will let fic , but now that i see that can be ended in a great way (because this is the best fic that i have readed abaut joe/seto) i have to tell you i am a big fan of your work , is sugoi, i even print it. so please go on i know that you can make this the best fic ever of joe/seto pairing
person yaoi girl
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i know that this is the second time that i write to you but in the first one i haven´t read the chapter , now i did and is ahhhhhhh, my cute se-chan , i love the part when malik get angry for the article but even more angry whit joey. wonder what will do malik if joey realize that he can possibly love seto.

update soon.
person koalared
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update. I thought this chapter was good, a needed piece to put somethings together.
Will Seto find out Jou took the blame for the mirror also? I wonder who would have sent the DM action figure?
Hmmm? Some interesting stuff with Jou and Malik. Seto needs to leave him by the way, IMHO. *g*
person koalared
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good, please continue, it's worth it.
person Jessica
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello...I was just wonderin' if you were ever going to come back and continue? I really liked the premise of your story and I had hoped to see more; reading 'Affirmations' and hearing that you were going to make a companion story, I was relieved, since the whole Seto/Jou angst was unresolved; but now...*hands on hips with furrowed brows and accusatory tone*...YOU ARE SLACKING! You said that you would continue and you have yet to show yourself in the year 2005! ...^_^...I'm just kidding, sorry if I sounded harsh, it was all in jest...I really would like to see what you have planned for Seto and Jou, though. Those were really harsh words that Jou said and for Seto to be affected like that to the point where he has to go to Malik/Marik for 'therapy', it's really heartbreaking..for both Seto and Malik, since Malik obviously cares for him. It's just so emotional and I really feel like your story has great potential, so I hope you continue! Thank you for your attentiveness to my rant. Ja ne! o_o
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! It's not that I'm sadistic and enjoy seeing Kaiba suffer, it's just that...it's so HIM. In my own opinion, Seto Kaiba is the most complex character in Yu-Gi-Oh, because he has such an angsty, complicated past, and there's so much weighing on his shoulders. He's my favorite character because he's the most REAL. So I've got to give you a truckload of credit for taking him on and delving into his soul-especially since you do it so accurately. I'm really looking forward to the next installment, but I'm a freshman in college myself, so I know it's difficult to find the time to write and update. I'm still going to demand that you update soon though ^_^
person Kerurie-dono
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Oh i liked this a lot!! please update as soon as you can!!!
person Denisse
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's so sad, please let Jou help Kaiba, he needs it really bad. ^_^> Please, continue soon