rate_review Reviews

What attracted me to the story was the idea of S/J. But I seem to be silently crying for Marik/Seto because I love the violence. I guess Seto likes Jou, and Jou likes Seto, but both have no clue because there are no reasons for them to be attracted to each other. Jou's sorta annoying in this fic. I'm probably not liking him because he hurt Seto in the first story and now he's naive to what he's feeling. What a dunce. Poor Seto, liking Jou. When it's over and they get together, I hope it's soon, so that they don't go through those impatient periods of two people in denial. But then again, i hope it deosn't turn to one of them realizing their feelings, and then getting all horny. I imagine Jou would be freaked. And horny. Too much NC-17 stories I've read, bad influence...

i'm really loving this story so keep up the great work

That was great!!!!
Please update very soon!!!!

JadedSoul, your killing me!!!!! Will you please hurry up and take Jou to see Kaiba, please?? I hope you'll have a chapter in which Jou will kick Malik and Marik's ass of what they did to Seto. So far the story is awesome, and please update quick, the cliffie lefted me for more.

Please dont stop with this story. Its one of the better stories I've read about the seto/jou pair. Please keep it going.

Loved It! Now, update! I'll be waiting for more..

This is a good story, Please keep writing it. The beach scene worked great. Looking forward to Jou and Seto's friendship or more progressing.

This is a great story! I'm very interested as to how everything will end. Please continue! You're an awsome writer!

~*m0vi3ang3l*~

I love your story! I just read it and I think it's great. I can't get enough of this couple and you write their characters out wonderfully! Update soon! PLEASE! Oh my god you have no idea how much I want you to update. Update. Now. Go! Start writing! Type faster! *Cracks Whip*

I'm glad you returned. This is a wonderful, very moving story. I hope Seto decides to provide additional compensation for his recently acquired company. The unsigned gift of the model of the Dark Magician was simply perfect. I hope you return soon with more.