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for Sand Lover

by Ykarzel

person koalared
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! I love a great Joey/Seto story, so very satisfying. Love all your stories by the way.
I would love to see more of this story with Joey and Seto, maybe with Joey in college etc. Thank you.
person Lapis_Dragon
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story KK. And you know at least I want the other idea written. I'm glad you finally finished it, it sure took enough hounding on my part to get it finished, although I'm glad you took your time with it.
But what I really want to see is Ash and Jay together in a fic. One that runs parallel to this one time wise.
person Mystery
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. Amazing! Wonderful as usual. *nodnod* I love how Jou's relationship with Seto is so.. well, in character! There are few stories that keep the characters so true to the actual story, and yet still have a plausible yaoi plot! ^____-

In general, I really love your stories, so I do hope you continue when you can! And I'm sure you have better things to do, but if you could please e-mail me when you update this, that would be amazingly appreciated since I don't check out this site too much! If it wouldn't be too much trouble, that is. ^^;

Awesome as usual! This is one of my favourite stories by you, along with Succumb! Love Jou/Seto, I do! ^__^ Ja!

~Mystery
person murrr
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update soon or ill... kill your dog...or something
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello!! Well girl i was wondering when you were planing on opdating this story, I really like it im getting into it.... soooo please will you continue it?!!! please send me an email or something to let me know ok!!

Ja matte ne~
person WolfGirl90
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Please update! I want to see what happens between Seto and Joey! I hope you update soon! It's really good you know? ~^__^~
person Chibi-chan
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Congrats, you've dun it again, Ykarzel. You've created another masterpiece. ...you're trying to kill me from suspence, aren't you ?? ^^
person chi
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
me like dis
pls post da last chappie
PLS
person Nikki
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An amazing story thus far. Please continue.
person Sapphire
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this fic. The beach scene is a nice change from the usual cityscapes. The OCs are nicely done, no Gary Stus in sight. The little hints laid about Joey finding the Seto-esque features of Jason the most attractive really brings his hidden emotions out into play. Very few grammatical errors, which make it easy to read. For a one shot, it seems a little lengthy, but I personally like longer fics better, so that was a big plus in my case. Jason is Hott; I see why Joey can't resist him, I sure couldn’t!