rate_review Reviews

I love this story...
I rhought I was gonna hate it because of this Jou/Jason thingy... but then... it was just soooooo awsome.

There's tons of things that I liked a lot but I'll just stick with two of them:
#1 "A world where there was a cat named Sabrina and sometimes the new boyfriend was allergic to it." this sentence. In all its insignificance. Beause it shows all about Seto, how he doesn't miss the slightest detail about Jou's life and also how he desperately wishes to be a part of it. That sentence caught me so off guard I had to read it over and over again...
#2 The way how Seto finds it disgusting that Jay lets Jou tie his tie in the beginning and then in the end of the story keeps his own on, so that Jou can play with it.
Same thing as above... totally insignificant... but at the same time, telling it all...

Oh, and I liked the kiss in the darkness... no talking... so sensual... and then Jou reaching over for Seto's hand... so real... I WAS in that situation once.

Ser: I loved this story! ^_^

Yami Ser: I agree hikari. This was brilliant and well written. If you ever got this published we would buy it as soon as it was avalible!

Ser: No doubt about that one. I have a thing for red heads so I loved Jason and his whole family... well except for his Mum!

Yami Ser: Once again bloody brilliant job!

~ Ser-Chan ^_^ and Yami Ser v_v

I found this really sweet! I really liked it, it was so adorable...the longest best written chapters I've read in a long time!
I really thought it was sooooooo sweet!
I can't wait...do more work...it was really beautiful...
Your writing... *sobs* restored my faith that there are people who write deceant lemons...*hugs author* I don't know what I would have done!
I'm serious, of all the lemons I've read, only a select handful really have substance, and so hats off to you for making this story's lemon and story itself one of the best damn stories I've read!
I'm really serious...this is an amazing fic! (Check out my stuf...trust me, it's not as good)
Anyways, seriously, good job, I really think this was amazing!
This was really, really good!
Good job! I'm not lying either!
*claps hands* ENCORE!

Lovely. I was so happy to see that you had updated your wonderful story. Your writing is amazing. And I hope to see that prequel around, I would love to read it. I really enjoyed how you portrayed each character and their roles. The depth and symbolism was great. You are an astounding writer, with a lot of talent. A job well done. :)

That was effing brilliant. It kept me up until 6:30 in the morning, and you've inspired me to draw yaoiful things. I bow to you, and at the same time shake my fist at you for being such a glorious author.

What I'm trying to say, is... Well, I can safely say that is the best fanfic I've ever read. And I'm sourly displeased that it ended.

Ahah. Well, nothin' lasts forever...

Kudos to you. I hope you write the prequel, or even a sequel.

<3

This is the very first Yu-Gi-Oh! story I ever read. I'm serious! I loved Joey and Seto's characters, it made them seem human. Absoultly wonderful!

I absolutely love your work, this is so wonderful. I love this story but not quite as much as I loved Beachin' Trip. I'd read a
prequel but I'd be estatic if you finished School Week. Any how, I could go on forever but I won't bore you.

This was a thoroughly enjoyable read. I really loved the O/C's they were well written and really added to the story. Good job!!!
Akuchan

This is a great story. I loved both parts. Well done.

*dances about in absolute joy* It was fabulous! I loved it, well worth the wait!

Prequels, sequels, in-betweequels, anything added to this story would be awesome!