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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi, nice chapter, who is that guy?, he want hurt seto-chan?, or is just ... for placer?, will honda know?
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November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi, grate fic, i just want said, sugoiiiiiii, seto-chan is in pain , and i love it, he is just ......i don´t have a word, please update soon, and make him sad, but let honda know how stupid is make kaiba cry , because kaiba love him alot, please
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I give up! Ok, y'all want to read my revised "no japanese" versions, please o hto http://www.fosff.net/viewuser.php?uid=1100 This place is just too slow and it took me HOURS to revise just book one here where it only took me about half an hour to revise all three books there. Thank you!! ^_^
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you all like it, and believe it or not, I have toyed with changing the japanese (excpet for where it kinda comes into play, but I think that was in the last book Oo) Anyway, it's going to be very time consuminangianging everything ^^; Oh well, if that's what people want, I shall deliver, but like I said, it's going to take a while. ^^ And no, I don't think of these as flames; just helpful hints and I appreciate them. ^_^
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've liked your story so far... however, the japanese words are kind of annoying. It bugs me when people do that: mixing japanese with english. The german may be in context, but japanese isn't. If you write in english, stick to it, embrace it, love it. Well, at least you don't put thos godamn author notes in the middle of the story: that's even more annoying.
This isn't a flame by the way. I would like to read more of it.
Cheers
This isn't a flame by the way. I would like to read more of it.
Cheers
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I use a combo of Babble Fish and other stories that use this method. I also think it's difficult anyway to determine a true English spelling of a Japanese word and names. I saw a little dissagreement over Otogi's name; one person argued it's Otougi, another said no it's Otogi... but like I said, I have been using Babble Fish and other stories. And no, I do not concider this a flame. ^^
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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy the plot and story line of your story. It's interesting and well developed but the use of japanese intersperced through out the story annoys me slightly. It would be better if they were spe cor correctly, and used in the correct way. Not that im flaming you, it's just something that bothers me as i read.
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job. Some nice surprises and a lot of drama. Must I beg? Update fast.