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for kokoro no jutsu

by PikaChan

person crimson 2006
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
person koi
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well..that was a great fic...congratulations. You should and have to write more of those! it was a sexy, love-making and i would call "a light fic". keep going with the good work and you will have many more reviews with positive sentences....you will be spoilded belive my (and in this case...being spoilded is very good)...:)
person Metanaito
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a lovely story. ^_^ I love Yuugi-ou, and this pairing. You did a very good job in writing this. A couple of typos here and there, but understandable nonetheless. Good work, and I'll read some more of your stuff soon.
person KKchan
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O That was your FIRST lemon? Well damn, write more! You're really good at them! ...Time for shower, and then I wanna draw Ryou naked... xD
person Mei
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!! ^__^ This was great! Another Malik/Ryou fanfic! ^__^ Whee!! Great Job!
person anon
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Let me get this right... that was your first lemon?? Omg, I seriously can't believe that. It was awesome! It's one of the most sensual fics I've read in a long, long time.
person Saiai Tokoya
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I just loved this fic. As a fellow artist...who draws random ygo yaoi all the time...i apperciate this a lot. Plus this pairing is my ultimate fave. It makes total sense! I just love love love it! Please do more of this, for a first time you did wonderful!

BTW Onion rings suck! Fries are better!
person Uniison
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okie dokie, first and foremost (and you prolly get this alot) i absolutely loved your fic. Its was very sweet and romantic. In many ways it reminded me of the manga Mars only using yugioh chars and it was yaoi. I am particularily fond of the coupling Ryou/Malik which was perfect for the artistic spin of the fic. Although i never thought Malik to be the art-sy type you made it work very well. I look forward to your next fic! ///_^=
person Safire1
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it should be a crime that that is only your first lemon! this is so cute! and i didnt even think i would like this pairing! i love it, keep on writing!
person eres
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh coolness! Make more, this fic was really great