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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story. i like to see bandit keith as a gay freak. write more. he's the hottest character on there.
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was hott (yes with two t's) Keith is so evil, poor Jou. I feel so bad, everyone makes that blonde look like a moron with the loud snoring and such, but... yeah, that was great ^.^ Very nice, good job ^.^ Hope to read another one like that... ok so not exactly liket, bt, but yeah... you get the picture... Later ^.^
~♥~ Li
~♥~ Li
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very, VERY few KeithxKatsuya pairings are created so I am extremely over joyed that I found another one. The slight realism with possible STD's and underage intercourse was an interesting and original add to PWP. Your writing wasn't bad either, though I have to say you should look over it again. (Typos and some repetitive word usage.) All and all truly decent.
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome!! wow, you're such a great writer!! VERY hot!!! That was a different pairing, but that's what made it so interesting! ^^v Great job!!!^^
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was extremely well written and damn hot. I always figured there was more going on in that room than just card stealing. Great middle of the night reading.
Akuchan
Akuchan
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
in the name of all that's good and holy, that was AWESOME. Very detailed, very well written, brilliant, beautiful I just discovered how much I like a slutty Jounichi. You rock!