AFF Fiction Portal
person Julie Bun
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That story that you made just a while ago that I read was very familiar and the same(except for the fact of Max and the Tauros).
person yugianal
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooooooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i love pokemon
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Seto_Kaiba
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a great story, but hard to read..my eyes feel like they're on fire....
person Meriah
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Use paragraphs because it's hard to read otherwise. And the word is "Pokémon," not Pokèmon ^_^;; HOWEVER, the story itself is great so far. Please continue!