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for Caught in the Act

by hatochiisai

person puffin
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. That was great. I can't believe what happen but that was great.
person Escaflowne Angel
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! OMG!!! that story made me laugh SO FRIKKEN HARD!!! OMFG!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!
person Shawaazu
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious!
person ~*~Sparky~*~
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XD
^My face has become permanelty like that. Awesome fic...laughed my ass off.
person Snoopy
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heheheh
very well written love the ending
pity its only a once off
id love to see what else the 2 boys get 'UP' to *wink*
lol anyways keep up the writing ciao
person Chibi B Channie
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XD This, has got to be one of your best fics ever! (Koibito Yami is still my favorite) It was mind blowing! Awesome, awesome job! I couldn't help but laugh during the end, it was just too perfect! I'm definately printing this out and adding it to my collection...^_^ *is unbelievably happy* Great work!
person tati
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was funny u have me ribs hurt lol lol lol
person akako mae
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lmao i love this fic,it's just so funny.^^ haha i bet joey didn't see that one coming,ne! good job on the chapter ^^
person Shinigami24
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have a question, are you in voyeurism? Cuz several of the stories have B/R havig sex into public, or near to it...
person R.C.
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ROFL omg that a kia killer LOL ..... where in the hell did u come up w/ that idea?
if u submit this story to some contest i bet u win gold
hahahahahhaha
keep up the good work
LOL!!!!!!!

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