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for Mother's Gift, Father's Pain

by hatochiisai

person icefox
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that story was so cute! you really should update. will yami be able to do anything? i hope so, for ryou's sake.
person K.C
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOO YOU CAN'T HURT MY KURA AND MY LITTLE RYOU-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate you you evil meany, couldn't you make Bakura go good like you usally do?? PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!PLEASE!!*out of breath* OK I'm done I love you and your work your an awsome writer keep it up!!
person Saka
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I've never seen this POV before. Wonderful job, nice fic. I liked it.

~IceAngel~
person Ruri_Star
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i...i don't like this story much sorry....
person VioletFlame
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaawwww.......*sniffles* That's so sweet! You should continue this fic, it's be really interesting to see how it plays out.. Although since Bakura's my bishounen, I'm worried about his shoulder....^_^ Tell! *sniffles again* That's so goddamn SWEET...... ^_^
person unknown
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have never read a story about his point of view...You did a great job at it....great writing
person Alaskantiger
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Ryou's dad was pissed!! hehe! I love it! But poor poor Ryou. I felt sorry for him. Thanks for sharing! :)
person zehlyah
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! excellent fic!! kinda had me tearing up with this one.