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for Happy Birthday Marik

by hatochiisai

person Yami-kuro
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved you on dievant art and just spent the last, oh i dont know, 7HOURS READING YOUR STORIES!!! YOU FREAKIN ROCK! And i love your 'Three Yamis and A Hiakri, and the one where ryou gets beaten, then raped...ya know the one where Bakura gets his pretty bedroom? and the one with all 6 of them....HELL LOVE THEM ALL!!

YOUR NOW DEVOTED FAN,
Yami Kuro Ookami Kaiba
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
.....DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!.....
person punk_lama
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I luv it!!! uts like the thing is one big freakin lemon! it was very well written and dispite that at the moment it was supposed tyo be serious, i couldnt help but laugh when Marik fell off the bed!
person Turtle
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy fucking hell. @_________@ ::Nosebleed:: That was awesome. I don't think I'll ever find a story that can live up to this lemon. Bravo! I love you!
person Tink
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..i agree with Ryou. I think i would be really disturbed if that many guys jacked off to me in a porn film i mean.. *hides*
I loved the ending! Loved!!

..yeah.. just wow. I loved the pov swaping all the time, and Marik and Ryous little "iloveyou's" during the film. Cute. Even if they were cut out.

OH! I LOVED the signs in the movie for Ryou. And i just adored you having Bakura giggling high-pitched into Ryou's hair. Can so see that.
I want a sequal *lol*
person Saka
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. What more can I say? And here I thought all of your others were hot. Damn you’ve got the knack! I swear, your one of the best around. Ya gotta do more like this! Really.

The fallin off the bed was funny. Plus the whole beginning. Actually everything was top quality.

I loved this one!!

~IceAngel~
person Shadow Mistress
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^______^ Oh my god, that was the best one-shot lemon I've ever read! Sexy, arousing, hot, bondage style 'rape' that was just ineffably well written. And I thought your "3 yamis and 1 hikari" was awesome, but this just amazes me even more. You are one talented lemon writer! *bows to your greatness* I've been reading a lot of your stories for the past week, and I'm just enjoying each and everyone of them. ^_^
person Ruri_Star
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that's sexy! great story!
person Amee
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just..woah. *speechless* That was, rather good (note sarcasam). I loved the little acknowlgements to each other during the film, and the falling off the bed was, amsuing lol. Really, really good. I loved it, i'll definetly be back to re-read it.


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person K
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Best damn story I have ever read.