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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to point out, it seems some of your story is missing.. it end as..
"The thief king inched himself closer and began to lick at his neck, his rough cat like tongue caused Ryou to shiver as he tilted his head to the si " thats it!
Where the end? Lol.
I hope Marik doesn't find out.. but at the same time it's kinda sad if he doesn't.. silly Ryou *sigh*
Well i liked what i read. lol!
"The thief king inched himself closer and began to lick at his neck, his rough cat like tongue caused Ryou to shiver as he tilted his head to the si " thats it!
Where the end? Lol.
I hope Marik doesn't find out.. but at the same time it's kinda sad if he doesn't.. silly Ryou *sigh*
Well i liked what i read. lol!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot! My only question is why it seems to be cut off near the end? It looks like it didn't upload completely, maybe. ^^
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it so so so much!! Its like Ryou like Marik, a couple I cant really think about, but then has other feelings about Bakura. I hope he gets paired up with 'Kura!! They are my favorite couple!! Oh, and I think ya didn't finish, and I hope you continue really soon!! and I hope you update, cause leaving this as a one-shot is like missing a chance through the opportunities in the window!! THINK ABOUT THE POSSIBILTIES!! yup. hehe!! UPDATE SOON!! *smiles*
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARE YOU GONNA FINISH THIS?!?!?! *nails completly chewed off*
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September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really loved it! It there a sequel? Please make more!
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September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A truer lesson will never be learned. Thank you for that story . . . it was great.
DracOnyx
DracOnyx
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I liked that. Especally Bakura's characterization.