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for Coalescence

by TheCzarina

person BuffyM
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You better write more! It was great!!XDXDXDXDXDXD ^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^^_^^_^ ^_~
Write more or I'll send my yami on you right yami!...Yami?
Yami Spike:*watches porn*
BuffyM:Yami!*hits him*
Yami Spike:Ow!*turns around*oh hi luv..yeah i'll get you if you don't write more!!
person Chibi-chan
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so glad to see that you updated! As usual -- wonderful chapter, and the little side-dish of a lemon was yummy too. :) I can't wait to read more.
person lupusdragon
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Aww, the sweetness
LD: Oh the spiciness. Oh so good!
Karen: cute little cuddly Yugi
LD: Everything about this is awesome. More, more, more!
Karen: Greedy much?
LD: ^____________^ I always want more of the good stuff. And I don't just mean the lemonade.
person Chibi-chan
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can't wait for more!
person Yummi Yami
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was the quickest update in all of forever!! ^____^ MESA SOOOO HAPPY!!!!! Grrr...*strangles Yugi's grandfather* DON'T YOU EVER DARE TO RUIN ANOTHER MOMENT LIKE THAT AGAIN, YOU TWISTED OLD GEEZER!!!!! >___X (No offense to the actual Mutou-san in the anime/manga. He's actually a pretty cool dude. ^^;;) PLEASE!! If you can, update TOMORROW and I'll be a very happy camper!!! ^___^ Keep on writing!!!
person lupusdragon
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: now what do they want to know about Yami? that seems kinda ominous.
LD: don't you think your friend would do the same if you had another person who shared your body?
Karen: No, I think my friends would just freak out.
LD: Oh, well that is true.
Karen: BTW, Yay for YY/S/Y! They all love each other! Happy happy Joy joy!
LD: Update soon!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Damn I love this story!
DD: Me too!
YD: Update quick!
DD: Really quick!!
person Chibi-chan
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. ^^ I still hope to see uke!Seto though. *grin* Continue soon!
person Yummi Yami
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, dat waz kool!! ^___^ Now all three of them can be there at the same time and place!! Awww...and it's so sweet how Yami loves both Yugi and Seto so much!! Please please please update again SOOOON!!!!
person lupusdragon
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: Close, so close
Karen: hehe. Hmmm, looks like Seto and Yami might get a little alone time before Seto goes back into his own body.
LD: Please, please let it be so!
Karen: This really is an excelent story. It is so complex and emotional. I can hardly wait unitl Yami gets his own body. This is just so cool!
LD: Please update again soon! I love it, I love it, I love it!