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for Coalescence

by TheCzarina

person Cherry
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! I love Y/S/Y stuff! Update please!

~*~*Cherry*~*~
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: Yugi is just SOOO cute!!
YD: And Yami and Seto are SOOO hot!
DD: *nods head* Uh-huh!
YD: Can't wait for the next chappie!
DD: *hands some of her hubby's famous chocolate chip cookies* These should help!
person lupusdragon
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Yay!
LD: Finally, geeze.
Karen: Finally lemon or finally Yugi made a descions?
LD: ... Um... Both! ^_^
Karen: o.O um, Okay.
LD: ^_^ I love this story and this chapter was awsome. I love that the Millennium Septer was reacting to Seto's emotions.
Karen: Yeah, that is pretty cool. And Yugi is so cute. I love the way he just casually threw in the "the three of us are going to be a threesome" Hehe Upd Update again soon. Please!
person lupusdragon
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: *sniffle* Oh so sweet!
LD: Yeah, I really liked Yugi's bit. Very intensely emotional.
Karen: ...
LD: And before you say anything else... HOT DAMN! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Karen: I am so glad Yugi made his decision. Seto and Yami would never hurt him.
LD: Yeppers. This is incredible. Please try to get 28 up today Pretty please!
person Chibi-chan
schedule June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:) Lemon. Heehee, it's so cool that you\finafinally doing it. I wonder what's in store for the three once they're all bonded...
person Chibi-chan
schedule June 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:) I'm happy to see a lemon finally in the works. Nice job. I can't wait to see you write more.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: OOOOO! Good!
YD: Awww...I wanted a lemon!!
DD: Yeah, me too!
YD: Pretty please?!
DD: We love lemonade!
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: Grrr... your superior writing techniques keep me want to read more and then you just end the chapter. *shaking fist* curse you!
Karen: hehehe. Don't you think you are over reacting just a little?
LD: No, dammit, I am sick of the teasing *pouts* you big tease.
Karen Awww, we love it. Really we do. *whispers* She is just under a le sle stress right now. Keep coming with the updates and she will love you forever ^_~
person lupusdragon
schedule June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: Hmm and the plot thickens.
Karen: Any thicker and all we'll have is cement!
LD: Yay for a good well rounded story.
Karen: It is a pleasure to read something so complex. How do you do it?
LD: *sighs wistfully*
person Chibi Dark Magician
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love you fic! I can't wait til you finish it or aleast have the next chapter! I have been sending the link to all my friends, and you have us all hooked!!! Please continue it! BTW I hope you donmindmind I added you to my AIM and hope to see you online. I'm Kyou no Neko, hope to talk to you soon! ^_^