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for Coalescence

by TheCzarina

person lupusdragon
schedule July 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: "our Yugi?!" CUUUUUTTTTE!
LD: *gag*
Karen: Come on, you know you liked it.
LD: I like the angst, the uncertainty, and the lemony freshness.
Karen; Of course you did.
person Debra
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Can't wait for more!!!!
person lupusdragon
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: ^_^ Great chappie! So much happieness. And Ryou/Bakura they are so cute
LD: Yami Bakura is not cute. Not cute! Hot, hot, hot!
Karen: And seriously, Otogi and Ryou together *drool*
LD: Really good, fun chapter. It is sad how the dubs destroy some of the deeper meanings in anime. Like american viwers aren't mature enough to uderstand some of the concepts *sigh* That is why I got the imported YGO DVDs instead of the engilsh ones ^_^
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Jou's so funny!
DD: And Otogi and Ryou ARE cute together.
YD: That bitch Anzu BETTER keep out of it!
DD: *waves M. Pencil* I may have to take her eye out!
YD: NExt chappie? Soon? Please?
person zatken
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dang....I am soooo happy for Yami, Seto, and Yugi....but what will happen next?????
person zatken
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man - this story's getting better and better. And my golly, I joined Jounouchi on the floor when he heard that confession from Yugi....mya mya....

Keep up with the story! Update very very soon, please :-D
person Julia
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi YamiCzarina!

WOW, what an awesome fic!!! This is one of the best fics I've ever read (and believe me when I say it must have been around 2000!) and I'm sooooooooo waiting for more. So please, don't let us hanging for too long! You're a great writer!!!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: HEHEHE!! Joey...hahaha
DD: More! Wanna read more!!
person Chibi-chan
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*shudder* Yuugi × Yami (or vice-versa) still creeps me out. @_@; The lemon was good. :) I enjoyed it.
person zatken
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man, I read all 28 chapters - each one being more awesome than the next one! Please please please update very very soon :-D