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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
First of all, let me say that you write and ess yss yourself incredibly well. I really enjoyed the cers ers thus far, and hope there will be more to come!
I like the plotline you've woven in----you've done an excellent job of not changing the characters' portrayals too much from the anime, and yet you've skillfully put them in totally different situations. (*really* different in some cases... ;) )
Really, you are a great writer, and I hope to see more of your work! Keep posting it!
I like the plotline you've woven in----you've done an excellent job of not changing the characters' portrayals too much from the anime, and yet you've skillfully put them in totally different situations. (*really* different in some cases... ;) )
Really, you are a great writer, and I hope to see more of your work! Keep posting it!
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July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! YOU HAVE GOT TO CONTINUE THIS! YOU'VE GONE THIS FAR, NOW YOU MUST FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Please. I love Seto/Yami/Yugi fics! Especially Yaoi!
Silver Dragon
Silver Dragon
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July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE!
YamiBuffy:Yes,it's a good story!
Spike:Very!'
hikariBuffy:SO PLZ WRITE MORE!!
all:plz!
YamiBuffy:Yes,it's a good story!
Spike:Very!'
hikariBuffy:SO PLZ WRITE MORE!!
all:plz!
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July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey, wow, that was very....um.....accurate--I respect that in your story and I loved it. Can't wait to find out how things tout.out.
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July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay, next chappi!!! You've just sooooooooooo made my day.....week....month...errrm well, what can I say - I'm addicted to "Coalescence". I really am. I'm looking every day for a next chapter. I must have read this fic about five times now... And I still can't believe that there is someone out there who can write something so awesome. PLEASE KEEP GOING!
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July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!!! I'm absolutely loving this story!!! Then again, I love almost all of your stories. Damn you and you're addictive writing. *shakes fist*
In any case, this is an awsome story! I'm loving the whole tension that was between Yugi and Seto in the beginning. Plus all of that wonderful interaction between Yami and Seto. To make things even better you added some fluff between Seto and Yugi. Overall, KAWAII!!!
It's also wonderful how you are just having the truth be known to all of Yugi's friends. In the beginning it would have been a little hesitant, however, as it is now, after they've established a good foundation to their relationships, its at a good time.
I absolutely love the way you write. From the fact that you are decent enough to check your paragraphing, grammar, spelling and punctuation. So few authors respect their readers enough to do that. I would just like to thank you on that. Similarily, you don't overcrowd your story with detail or dialogue. You seem to have a wonderful mesh. Also the fact that you have such wonderfully long chapters. That is one of the things I appreciate most. Mainly because authors write maybe ten pages and feel it is enough to post. That's no where near long enough. You give your readers something to read, and not just glance over. Thank you!
Finally, I would juste toe to say update often. When I find authors I really, really like, I find it agonizing to wait so long for a new chapter. I realize that you have a life away from your computer and writing some amazing fanfictions. However, I tend to have this little habit of reading constantly. With so few good quality fics out there, I try to cling onto those few that I can find. Updating just makes my day.
Okay, I'm done now. Till next chapter then! Keep typin'
In any case, this is an awsome story! I'm loving the whole tension that was between Yugi and Seto in the beginning. Plus all of that wonderful interaction between Yami and Seto. To make things even better you added some fluff between Seto and Yugi. Overall, KAWAII!!!
It's also wonderful how you are just having the truth be known to all of Yugi's friends. In the beginning it would have been a little hesitant, however, as it is now, after they've established a good foundation to their relationships, its at a good time.
I absolutely love the way you write. From the fact that you are decent enough to check your paragraphing, grammar, spelling and punctuation. So few authors respect their readers enough to do that. I would just like to thank you on that. Similarily, you don't overcrowd your story with detail or dialogue. You seem to have a wonderful mesh. Also the fact that you have such wonderfully long chapters. That is one of the things I appreciate most. Mainly because authors write maybe ten pages and feel it is enough to post. That's no where near long enough. You give your readers something to read, and not just glance over. Thank you!
Finally, I would juste toe to say update often. When I find authors I really, really like, I find it agonizing to wait so long for a new chapter. I realize that you have a life away from your computer and writing some amazing fanfictions. However, I tend to have this little habit of reading constantly. With so few good quality fics out there, I try to cling onto those few that I can find. Updating just makes my day.
Okay, I'm done now. Till next chapter then! Keep typin'
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July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sweet. Loved it. Can't wait for more.
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July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your story !!!!! Yami and Seto are so hot!!!!! They are my favorite pair!!!!!!!!!!! The storyline is great!!!!!!!!! Please
continue to write, you are one hell of a writer!!!!! I wish I could write like that!!!!!!
continue to write, you are one hell of a writer!!!!! I wish I could write like that!!!!!!
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July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
RD:hey Red Dragon here great ficcs kes keep it up i want to see yugi and yami become seprete beings and fight with seto at there side one DM one BEWD and one um i another DM cuz it is his favortie monster and i cant really think of any other monster that is like yugi but i bet its like the most powerful ones like exodia and the magician of black chaos so keep up the good work i hope to read more soon so pls PLS PLS PLS continue to write more and let everyone know that together no one will stand a chance against yami and yugi well i gtg now bye
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July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great!Super great!Write tons more!!!!!!Please?